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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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Creese55
The first thing I noticed was what the instructor said about the plagiarizing. I'm not sure if you have tried to correct it yet, but from what I can see you have not. When revising that part try really understanding what it is saying. Get to the point where you do not have to read it and copy it word from word. Then type it again in your own words. Besides that one problem I think you have contributed useful information to the article so far. One thing that I learned from reading your article contributions is that attitudes can be formed through conditioning. I feel like I understood that and it makes sense, but it never occurred to me that not only does conditioning effect behaviors, but it also effects attitudes.
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
Creese55
The first thing I noticed was what the instructor said about the plagiarizing. I'm not sure if you have tried to correct it yet, but from what I can see you have not. When revising that part try really understanding what it is saying. Get to the point where you do not have to read it and copy it word from word. Then type it again in your own words. Besides that one problem I think you have contributed useful information to the article so far. One thing that I learned from reading your article contributions is that attitudes can be formed through conditioning. I feel like I understood that and it makes sense, but it never occurred to me that not only does conditioning effect behaviors, but it also effects attitudes.