Article Selection
The Storming of the Winter Palace
Russell, J. (1942). COLLECTIVE FARMING IN RUSSIA AND THE UKRAINE. Science (New York, N.Y.), 96(2481), 47-52.
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Article Evaluation
I believe there should be additional links from this article to other articles so people could quickly learn what certain words mean. For example, "bednyak" and "serednyak" should have links to their own pages. This article quotes often and uses a lot of terminology that seems skewed in it's bias. Perhaps, it should just say more about what happened. The links it does have do work. On the talk page, I think people make a lot of points I agree with in regard to making the article better. It needs more facts and a better tone. It also needs more of the history, not just want happened after a certain year.
Article Selection
The Storming of the Winter Palace
Russell, J. (1942). COLLECTIVE FARMING IN RUSSIA AND THE UKRAINE. Science (New York, N.Y.), 96(2481), 47-52.
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Cjacobites. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Article Evaluation
I believe there should be additional links from this article to other articles so people could quickly learn what certain words mean. For example, "bednyak" and "serednyak" should have links to their own pages. This article quotes often and uses a lot of terminology that seems skewed in it's bias. Perhaps, it should just say more about what happened. The links it does have do work. On the talk page, I think people make a lot of points I agree with in regard to making the article better. It needs more facts and a better tone. It also needs more of the history, not just want happened after a certain year.