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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
Benhansen11
I think your addition of authentic cultural communication into this article is a really addition it gives a new perspective to the article that hasn’t been shown yet. I also think that you do a good job at being very concise in your writing about it. One thing to fix would be the capitalization before each of the bullet points in this section of examples.
I also thought that the culture based situation conflict model addition was very good I would like to see the image in the draft to get a sense of what you are going to be adding but I think it would be a good thing to add.
You will also have to add more sources to this paper it looks like in your references section they are added twice which may just have been an accident but it is something to look into
Overall I thought these additions will be very beneficial to the overall paper and you are on the right track when it comes to the rough draft.
![]() | Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional ResourcesCheck out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions. |
Benhansen11
I think your addition of authentic cultural communication into this article is a really addition it gives a new perspective to the article that hasn’t been shown yet. I also think that you do a good job at being very concise in your writing about it. One thing to fix would be the capitalization before each of the bullet points in this section of examples.
I also thought that the culture based situation conflict model addition was very good I would like to see the image in the draft to get a sense of what you are going to be adding but I think it would be a good thing to add.
You will also have to add more sources to this paper it looks like in your references section they are added twice which may just have been an accident but it is something to look into
Overall I thought these additions will be very beneficial to the overall paper and you are on the right track when it comes to the rough draft.