Potential Articles

• Goo Goo Dolls [ [1]
• Blue Ridge Parkway [ [2]
• The Glass Castle [ [3]
• Isadora Duncan [ [4]
• Sharon Springs, New York [ [5]

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Example Articles

• Ima Hogg [ [6]
• Valley View (Romney, West Virginia) [ [7]
• Zion National Park [ [8]

Significant Edits in Blue Ridge Parkway Article

Original version of the article was a single paragraph, so a large number of organizational changes were made.

• Sections and table of contents added
• Photographs added to appropriate sections
• Table of information added for quick reference
• Introduction made more concise and general (changes still needed)
• Organization of "Route Description" adjusted so that more important and general information comes before more specific information
• Some sections deleted or merged into other sections

Significant Edits in Isadora Duncan Article

Original version of the article contained only Duncan's date of birth and nickname.

• First section added was "Personal Life"
• "Personal Life" section was split into 2 sections: "Personal Life" and "Later Life"
• A new section, "Career," was added, and much of the content from "Personal Life" was moved into it
• A "Miscellaneous" section was added, but was quickly removed due to irrelevance
• "References" section added
• Section titled "Death" designated to her absurd death
• Photographs added, and then organized in a more balanced, smooth way