Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.
Option 1
Article title
Salt Mining
Article Evaluation
This article has a poor introductory paragraph on the topic, this could be in better depth. The article also has a "idiomatic use" portion which is unnecessary and does not relate to the topic. Other content could be added such as a portion about the cultural benefits about salt, the environmental impacts salt ming has, and what salt is used for (not just eating) to name a few.
Sources
Mancini, F., Stecchi, F., Zanni, M., Gabbianelli, G. (2008). Monitoring ground subsidence by salt mining in the city of Tuzla (Bosnia and Herzegovina). Environmental Geology. 58: 381-389.
Bell, F,G.(1992). Salt mining and associated subsidence in Mid-Chesire, England and its influence on planning. Environmental and Engineering Geoscience. 4:371-386.
This article does not have much information except what cultural eutrophication is and some ways it can happen. The introduction has a lot of run on sentences and could be phrased in a better way. More detailed ways in which cultural eutrophication occurs more than just sewage and agriculture. Ways to fix cultural eutrophication can be implemented such as wetland nurseries, filtering systems and better techniques to applying fertilizer. Some case studies could be applied as well.
Sources
Smith, V,H.(n.d.). Cultural eutrophication of inland, estuarine and coastal waters. Successes, Limitations, and Frontiers in Ecosystem Science.
Lu, Y., Meyers, P.A.(2009). Sediment lipid biomarkers as recorders of the contamination and cultural eutrophication of Lake Erie, 1909-2003. Organic Geochemistry. 40(8): 912-921.
Lu, Y., Meyers, P.A., Eadie, B,J., Robbins, J,A.(2009). Carbon cycling in Lake Erie during cultural eutrophication over the last century inferred from the stable carbon isotope composition of sediments. Journal of Paleolimnology. 43: 261-272.
This article lacks a history background portion which could be added. There is not many references therefore more reliable information can be added in each content portion. As well a "benefits" of organic fertilizer and the environmental impact organic fertilizer has could be added content.
Sources
Li,B.Y., Zhou, D.M., Cang, L., Zhang, H.L., Fan, X.H., Qin, S.W.(2007). Soil micronutrient availability to crops as affected by long-term inorganic and organic fertilizer applications. Soil and Tillage Research. 96(1-2): 166-173.
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.
Option 1
Article title
Salt Mining
Article Evaluation
This article has a poor introductory paragraph on the topic, this could be in better depth. The article also has a "idiomatic use" portion which is unnecessary and does not relate to the topic. Other content could be added such as a portion about the cultural benefits about salt, the environmental impacts salt ming has, and what salt is used for (not just eating) to name a few.
Sources
Mancini, F., Stecchi, F., Zanni, M., Gabbianelli, G. (2008). Monitoring ground subsidence by salt mining in the city of Tuzla (Bosnia and Herzegovina). Environmental Geology. 58: 381-389.
Bell, F,G.(1992). Salt mining and associated subsidence in Mid-Chesire, England and its influence on planning. Environmental and Engineering Geoscience. 4:371-386.
This article does not have much information except what cultural eutrophication is and some ways it can happen. The introduction has a lot of run on sentences and could be phrased in a better way. More detailed ways in which cultural eutrophication occurs more than just sewage and agriculture. Ways to fix cultural eutrophication can be implemented such as wetland nurseries, filtering systems and better techniques to applying fertilizer. Some case studies could be applied as well.
Sources
Smith, V,H.(n.d.). Cultural eutrophication of inland, estuarine and coastal waters. Successes, Limitations, and Frontiers in Ecosystem Science.
Lu, Y., Meyers, P.A.(2009). Sediment lipid biomarkers as recorders of the contamination and cultural eutrophication of Lake Erie, 1909-2003. Organic Geochemistry. 40(8): 912-921.
Lu, Y., Meyers, P.A., Eadie, B,J., Robbins, J,A.(2009). Carbon cycling in Lake Erie during cultural eutrophication over the last century inferred from the stable carbon isotope composition of sediments. Journal of Paleolimnology. 43: 261-272.
This article lacks a history background portion which could be added. There is not many references therefore more reliable information can be added in each content portion. As well a "benefits" of organic fertilizer and the environmental impact organic fertilizer has could be added content.
Sources
Li,B.Y., Zhou, D.M., Cang, L., Zhang, H.L., Fan, X.H., Qin, S.W.(2007). Soil micronutrient availability to crops as affected by long-term inorganic and organic fertilizer applications. Soil and Tillage Research. 96(1-2): 166-173.