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Aaliyah Nicole
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Women Reduced to Sexual Objects
Everything in this article is relevant to the title, to me the article was extremely clear concise.
There was a complete bias inside this article, but I think that is acceptable considering the topic and that this from a feminist's perspective. The author clearly is not pleased with what the porn industry is doing to how people view women, but then there are also sex positive feminist who voice their opinions and see nothing with the porn industry. The author uses recent findings and the citations are credible and easily accessible. Through the article some of the same citations are repeated. There aren't any fact that were unnecessarily cited. The sources that were used are also biased to much the biases behind the article. In class we didn't really dive deep into the topic, but opinions were voiced. In the article it covers every view of biases and goes over every aspect, the good and the bad. On the talk page there are some who believes that there were too many quotes and feel as though there are some factual inaccuracy, but on the other hand people would like to simply reorganize it or add more information to it. I see nothing wrong with the way the article is set up, it opens up both side of the argument and provides more than enough sources in order for someone to do their own research if they wanted to.
| This is a user sandbox of
Aaliyaaahh. You can use it for testing or practicing edits. This is not the sandbox where you should draft your assigned article for a dashboard.wikiedu.org course. To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. |
Aaliyah Nicole
((Bold))
Women Reduced to Sexual Objects
Everything in this article is relevant to the title, to me the article was extremely clear concise.
There was a complete bias inside this article, but I think that is acceptable considering the topic and that this from a feminist's perspective. The author clearly is not pleased with what the porn industry is doing to how people view women, but then there are also sex positive feminist who voice their opinions and see nothing with the porn industry. The author uses recent findings and the citations are credible and easily accessible. Through the article some of the same citations are repeated. There aren't any fact that were unnecessarily cited. The sources that were used are also biased to much the biases behind the article. In class we didn't really dive deep into the topic, but opinions were voiced. In the article it covers every view of biases and goes over every aspect, the good and the bad. On the talk page there are some who believes that there were too many quotes and feel as though there are some factual inaccuracy, but on the other hand people would like to simply reorganize it or add more information to it. I see nothing wrong with the way the article is set up, it opens up both side of the argument and provides more than enough sources in order for someone to do their own research if they wanted to.