Lead
Lead was created by Declan Includes information used so far. It seems to include the major sections so far. Lead is concise.
Content
The content is Neutral. The content is up to date. There is content that he has not gotten to yet. The content is addressing how Islam spread but hasn't mentioned an equity gap yet.
Tone and Balance
There are no heavily balanced claims. Nothing is trying to persuade the reader in a certain direction
Sources and References
The sources are all reliable and backed correctly. There is a good number of sources added so far. The links work as intended. The content added has good grammar is clear and concise.
Images and Media
N/A
Overall Impressions
The content is overall improved by a ton. The article still needs to be a little beefier. The strength of the content added so far gives the reader context on the Background of the article.
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)
Lead
Lead was created by Declan Includes information used so far. It seems to include the major sections so far. Lead is concise.
Content
The content is Neutral. The content is up to date. There is content that he has not gotten to yet. The content is addressing how Islam spread but hasn't mentioned an equity gap yet.
Tone and Balance
There are no heavily balanced claims. Nothing is trying to persuade the reader in a certain direction
Sources and References
The sources are all reliable and backed correctly. There is a good number of sources added so far. The links work as intended. The content added has good grammar is clear and concise.
Images and Media
N/A
Overall Impressions
The content is overall improved by a ton. The article still needs to be a little beefier. The strength of the content added so far gives the reader context on the Background of the article.
Peer review
Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects: LeadGuiding questions:
ContentGuiding questions:
Tone and BalanceGuiding questions:
Sources and ReferencesGuiding questions:
OrganizationGuiding questions:
Images and MediaGuiding questions: If your peer added images or media
For New Articles OnlyIf the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.
Overall impressionsGuiding questions:
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.
Additional Resources |
(provide username)
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)