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Crisco 1492 (
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Created by Ssilvers ( talk). Nominated by Pgallert ( talk) at 14:41, 12 June 2014 (UTC).
Amandajm (
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How about this:
See footnote 16. BTW, I repaired footnote 19, so it works now. -- Ssilvers ( talk) 04:46, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
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Thank you,
Ssilvers. Much appreciated. To add to the reviews by Amandajm above, the QPQ is done, and ALT1 checks out online with citation #28. The original hook checks out online with citation #14 for performing at the festival each year, and online citation #26 for touring. I have removed the inverted commas from the orchestra name in the article, and corrected the image size and rationale for the
poster image, to match the image licence. (Sorry I cannot do any more adjustments without compromising the independence of my review.) There are two more very minor issues which I had missed previously: (1)
"well-known" may count as a weasel word in that context (because it's like "popular" or "famous"); it should be acceptable to replace it with something like "specialist". (2) "or David Steadman often music direct the company" doesn't make sense. Thank you for your patience. --
Storye book (
talk) 10:21, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
The result was: promoted by —
Crisco 1492 (
talk) 09:38, 30 June 2014 (UTC)
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Created by Ssilvers ( talk). Nominated by Pgallert ( talk) at 14:41, 12 June 2014 (UTC).
Amandajm (
talk) 03:51, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
How about this:
See footnote 16. BTW, I repaired footnote 19, so it works now. -- Ssilvers ( talk) 04:46, 13 June 2014 (UTC)
[left]
Thank you,
Ssilvers. Much appreciated. To add to the reviews by Amandajm above, the QPQ is done, and ALT1 checks out online with citation #28. The original hook checks out online with citation #14 for performing at the festival each year, and online citation #26 for touring. I have removed the inverted commas from the orchestra name in the article, and corrected the image size and rationale for the
poster image, to match the image licence. (Sorry I cannot do any more adjustments without compromising the independence of my review.) There are two more very minor issues which I had missed previously: (1)
"well-known" may count as a weasel word in that context (because it's like "popular" or "famous"); it should be acceptable to replace it with something like "specialist". (2) "or David Steadman often music direct the company" doesn't make sense. Thank you for your patience. --
Storye book (
talk) 10:21, 29 June 2014 (UTC)