The following is an archived discussion of Feistritz an der Gail's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
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The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa (
talk) 09:48, 17 February 2013 (UTC).
The article is a 5fold expansion, passes DYK check, and is reasonably well-sourced. The hook is sourced and within regulations but reads a little long and has grammar/style issues. Possibly delete "on
Whit Monday" and reword the text to make it more idiomatic. Thus,
The photo is PD and was a photo of the day but could it be cropped for this purpose?. —
AjaxSmack 09:11, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I have added the name of
User:Ipigott to the contributors list as he has added substantial text. The ALT1 Hook proposed is fine. I have also cropped the img. --Nvvchar. 15:59, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
I put the cropped version at a different filename over at Commons to preserve the original. I'll show both here for others to compare.
←crop / original→
Looks good to go with ALT1. —
AjaxSmack 22:58, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
The following is an archived discussion of Feistritz an der Gail's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s
(talk) page, the nominated article's
(talk) page, or the Did you know(talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page.See the talk page guidelines for
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The result was: promoted by
Miyagawa (
talk) 09:48, 17 February 2013 (UTC).
The article is a 5fold expansion, passes DYK check, and is reasonably well-sourced. The hook is sourced and within regulations but reads a little long and has grammar/style issues. Possibly delete "on
Whit Monday" and reword the text to make it more idiomatic. Thus,
The photo is PD and was a photo of the day but could it be cropped for this purpose?. —
AjaxSmack 09:11, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I have added the name of
User:Ipigott to the contributors list as he has added substantial text. The ALT1 Hook proposed is fine. I have also cropped the img. --Nvvchar. 15:59, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
I put the cropped version at a different filename over at Commons to preserve the original. I'll show both here for others to compare.
←crop / original→
Looks good to go with ALT1. —
AjaxSmack 22:58, 16 February 2013 (UTC)