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Fresh eyes might find other things, too. Unsure why this one has sat for so very long. Need to do spot checks, but it reads well for the most part. I'm a bit concerned about puffiness around Núñez's mayoral record. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:38, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- The latter issue has been rectified by now, and the spot checks came back clean. I took care of the screen reader-only caption and alt text. Will pass. One comment, and I suppose this is a style thing: why not use {{ ill}} for linking to topics where eswiki has a page but not enwiki, Krisgabwoosh? Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:32, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
- Sammi Brie Indeed it's just a style choice. The Bolivia WikiProject has few active members so unless I personally intend to someday create an English article, I prefer to include a direct link to eswiki rather than leave the red link {{ ill}} makes. Chances are, if an English article is ever created, I'll be there to replace the relevant link. Anyway, thanks for the review! Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 04:12, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
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Núñez's mayoral tenure was lauded for the major strides made for Rurrenabaque's ecotourism industry, which generated significant economic growth for the city.
I wonder if this is a bit puffy?
- Perhaps 'lauded' is a bit much. Tweaked to "mayoral tenure saw strides made for Rurrenabaque's ecotourism industry, which generate increased economic growth for the city."
Núñez's achievements in promoting economic development, ecological tourism, and environmental regulation were lauded by various national and international institutions.
What backs this claim up?
- Citation 1, which, admittedly, is his government page. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
As such, Áñez's appointment of Víctor Hugo Zamora and Carlos Melchor Díaz, respectively, would have occurred at his suggestion.
andArmed with this information, he would have fled on a small plane into Brazil.
— Grouped these two together. I hear the Spanish conditional tense under this but I'm not sure it's the right one to use in English.
- Corrected. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- the MDS' electoral campaign — should be "MDS's", see MOS:'S. Same with "Morales' " later on.
Done
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- "6 November 2019" should be "6 November 2020"
- Done
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talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Sourcing and spot checks
Will do tomorrow. General source quality looks good on the whole, just needs spot checks. Earwig turns up a 0.0% figure as the references are all in Spanish.
Random spot checks of
- 6: This is an explainer as to what the SNPP does:
La Secretaría Nacional de Participación Popular es la responsable de normar, regular y controlar las actividades de fortalecimiento municipal
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No obstante, la agrupación Primero el Beni propuso a otros dos precandidatos: Yerko Núñez, alcalde de Rurrenabaque, y Carmelo Lenz, subgobernador de la provincia Vaca Díez.
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En el ámbito municipal, los alcaldes René Joaquino, de Potosí, y Yerko Martín Núñez, de Rurrenabaque, presentaron sus renuncias ante el Órgano Electoral.
From context, I assume Bolivia has resign-to-run laws? This isn't really used, but it makes sense. - 19: Title and text check out.
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Núñez es beniano y compañero político de la presidenta desde hace más de 20 años.
"More than a decade" indeed, though "more than 20 years" would also be supported by the source. - 31: Mentions Núñez as a mano derecha de la Presidenta.
- 32: Mentions a minigabinete with Murillo and López.
Other items
- No issues with image licensing. The image outside the infobox needs alt text, though "Refer to caption" will suffice.
- The table needs a caption, even if it is only visible to screen readers ( MOS:DTAB).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 07:38, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
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Fresh eyes might find other things, too. Unsure why this one has sat for so very long. Need to do spot checks, but it reads well for the most part. I'm a bit concerned about puffiness around Núñez's mayoral record. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:38, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- The latter issue has been rectified by now, and the spot checks came back clean. I took care of the screen reader-only caption and alt text. Will pass. One comment, and I suppose this is a style thing: why not use {{ ill}} for linking to topics where eswiki has a page but not enwiki, Krisgabwoosh? Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:32, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
- Sammi Brie Indeed it's just a style choice. The Bolivia WikiProject has few active members so unless I personally intend to someday create an English article, I prefer to include a direct link to eswiki rather than leave the red link {{ ill}} makes. Chances are, if an English article is ever created, I'll be there to replace the relevant link. Anyway, thanks for the review! Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 04:12, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
Copy changes
Núñez's mayoral tenure was lauded for the major strides made for Rurrenabaque's ecotourism industry, which generated significant economic growth for the city.
I wonder if this is a bit puffy?
- Perhaps 'lauded' is a bit much. Tweaked to "mayoral tenure saw strides made for Rurrenabaque's ecotourism industry, which generate increased economic growth for the city."
Núñez's achievements in promoting economic development, ecological tourism, and environmental regulation were lauded by various national and international institutions.
What backs this claim up?
- Citation 1, which, admittedly, is his government page. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
As such, Áñez's appointment of Víctor Hugo Zamora and Carlos Melchor Díaz, respectively, would have occurred at his suggestion.
andArmed with this information, he would have fled on a small plane into Brazil.
— Grouped these two together. I hear the Spanish conditional tense under this but I'm not sure it's the right one to use in English.
- Corrected. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- the MDS' electoral campaign — should be "MDS's", see MOS:'S. Same with "Morales' " later on.
- Done
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
- "6 November 2019" should be "6 November 2020"
- Done
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 21:48, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Sourcing and spot checks
Will do tomorrow. General source quality looks good on the whole, just needs spot checks. Earwig turns up a 0.0% figure as the references are all in Spanish.
Random spot checks of
- 6: This is an explainer as to what the SNPP does:
La Secretaría Nacional de Participación Popular es la responsable de normar, regular y controlar las actividades de fortalecimiento municipal
- 12:
No obstante, la agrupación Primero el Beni propuso a otros dos precandidatos: Yerko Núñez, alcalde de Rurrenabaque, y Carmelo Lenz, subgobernador de la provincia Vaca Díez.
- 16:
En el ámbito municipal, los alcaldes René Joaquino, de Potosí, y Yerko Martín Núñez, de Rurrenabaque, presentaron sus renuncias ante el Órgano Electoral.
From context, I assume Bolivia has resign-to-run laws? This isn't really used, but it makes sense. - 19: Title and text check out.
- 23:
Núñez es beniano y compañero político de la presidenta desde hace más de 20 años.
"More than a decade" indeed, though "more than 20 years" would also be supported by the source. - 31: Mentions Núñez as a mano derecha de la Presidenta.
- 32: Mentions a minigabinete with Murillo and López.
Other items
- No issues with image licensing. The image outside the infobox needs alt text, though "Refer to caption" will suffice.
- The table needs a caption, even if it is only visible to screen readers ( MOS:DTAB).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.