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Well, clearly you are very knowledgeable on the subject and put a lot of work into this project. However, the reading level is just way too high, some words that i didn't even understand did not have links to them. The figures were very good, however the explanation needs to become more detailed to explain to somebody who is not as knowledgeable what the figures mean. Really, other than that, the page is fantastic. Simplification and easier vocabulary could help the basic reader out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Onavo1 ( talk • contribs) 19:58, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
This page is incredibly detailed, informative, and well-written! However, this page is still too advanced for almost all readers. (Although, this topic does require somewhat of an advanced understanding of geologic and biological concepts to get the gist anyway.) I would highly recommend that you distill this page of jargon and all unnecessary information. Images are worth their weight in words, so a eutrophication image would help a lot in understanding what anoxia is in the first place for readers and what causes it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Terranova274 ( talk • contribs) 15:57, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
There isn't much to say this is a good page and you clearly know the subject but the reading level is too high. This is a fantastic page for someone knowledgeable about this and wants to learn more but it's too much for a high school student. The images are good. What do the black arrows in the second image represent? I'm not sure how much of the article you can take out but you need to trim it down and make it easier to understand. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zkelly1 ( talk • contribs) 22:38, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
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A fact from Western Interior Seaway anoxia appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 24 November 2012 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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Well, clearly you are very knowledgeable on the subject and put a lot of work into this project. However, the reading level is just way too high, some words that i didn't even understand did not have links to them. The figures were very good, however the explanation needs to become more detailed to explain to somebody who is not as knowledgeable what the figures mean. Really, other than that, the page is fantastic. Simplification and easier vocabulary could help the basic reader out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Onavo1 ( talk • contribs) 19:58, 11 November 2012 (UTC)
This page is incredibly detailed, informative, and well-written! However, this page is still too advanced for almost all readers. (Although, this topic does require somewhat of an advanced understanding of geologic and biological concepts to get the gist anyway.) I would highly recommend that you distill this page of jargon and all unnecessary information. Images are worth their weight in words, so a eutrophication image would help a lot in understanding what anoxia is in the first place for readers and what causes it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Terranova274 ( talk • contribs) 15:57, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
There isn't much to say this is a good page and you clearly know the subject but the reading level is too high. This is a fantastic page for someone knowledgeable about this and wants to learn more but it's too much for a high school student. The images are good. What do the black arrows in the second image represent? I'm not sure how much of the article you can take out but you need to trim it down and make it easier to understand. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Zkelly1 ( talk • contribs) 22:38, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
This article is the subject of an educational assignment at Louisiana State University supported by the Wikipedia Ambassador Program during the 2012 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.
The above message was substituted from {{WAP assignment}}
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PrimeBOT (
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