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Created by Voorts ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:38, 15 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Weird Faith; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: Voorts ( talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 22:38, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
I'll get a review of this written within the next few days.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 22:38, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Voorts, I've evaluated everything except for the prose itself. The main issue right now is the use of quotes, and any fix to that is likely to significantly alter the text, so I'm going to put it on hold now and evaluate the prose after everything else is addressed. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 02:51, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Background and production:
Diaz also began working on her sixth studio album, Weird Faith.– This reads like a side tangent even though it's the main subject of the article.
in Nashville and in upstate New York, recorded the album in upstate New York– Can this be written to avoid having "upstate New York" twice in a row?
including trusting the growth of her career and her relationships with her new manager, label, and romantic partner– This is a little wordy and hard to follow.
Composition and themes:
Weird Faith has been describedand
Critics have described– Introducing two sentences in a row with "described" affects the sentences' flow.
Critical reception:
For Glide Magazine, Dillon wrote that Diaz's blunt songwriting "anchor[s]" listeners– Blunt is being said in wikivoice, I suggest clarifying that Dillon said it was blunt.
the album focused on "processing emotion"– This is more of a theme than critical reception. There are a few other borderline cases, and it might be worth looking through this section again to see if any of them are analysis of the composition or themes instead of critics' opinions.
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All sources look reliable. AllMusic is correctly used only for its review content. The one thing that needs to be looked at more closely here is the use of quotations. A significant portion of this article is lifted directly from the sources instead of being paraphrased. WP:OVERQUOTE and WP:OVERQUOTING both touch on this.
Spot checks:
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The article is missing release information. Album articles commonly have a section on the release and promotion. Even if there's not enough for a full section, the basics should still be included as part of the production. Most pressingly is that the release date isn't found in the body.
No neutrality issues. The article is written in a neutral tone, and no ideas are given undue emphasis.
No recent disputes. The article might benefit from an update over the years if more is written about the album, but that's not urgent and it wouldn't require significant rewrites.
One non-free image with a valid non-free use rationale.
@ Thebiguglyalien: Comments addressed above. I've also added a couple of reviews to the review section. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 22:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Weird Faith has been listed as one of the
Music good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: March 30, 2024. ( Reviewed version). |
This article is rated GA-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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A fact from Weird Faith appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the
Did you know column on 22 March 2024 (
check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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The result was: promoted by
PrimalMustelid
talk 03:59, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
Created by Voorts ( talk). Self-nominated at 01:38, 15 February 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Weird Faith; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: Voorts ( talk · contribs)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 22:38, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
I'll get a review of this written within the next few days.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 22:38, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
Voorts, I've evaluated everything except for the prose itself. The main issue right now is the use of quotes, and any fix to that is likely to significantly alter the text, so I'm going to put it on hold now and evaluate the prose after everything else is addressed. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 02:51, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Background and production:
Diaz also began working on her sixth studio album, Weird Faith.– This reads like a side tangent even though it's the main subject of the article.
in Nashville and in upstate New York, recorded the album in upstate New York– Can this be written to avoid having "upstate New York" twice in a row?
including trusting the growth of her career and her relationships with her new manager, label, and romantic partner– This is a little wordy and hard to follow.
Composition and themes:
Weird Faith has been describedand
Critics have described– Introducing two sentences in a row with "described" affects the sentences' flow.
Critical reception:
For Glide Magazine, Dillon wrote that Diaz's blunt songwriting "anchor[s]" listeners– Blunt is being said in wikivoice, I suggest clarifying that Dillon said it was blunt.
the album focused on "processing emotion"– This is more of a theme than critical reception. There are a few other borderline cases, and it might be worth looking through this section again to see if any of them are analysis of the composition or themes instead of critics' opinions.
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All sources look reliable. AllMusic is correctly used only for its review content. The one thing that needs to be looked at more closely here is the use of quotations. A significant portion of this article is lifted directly from the sources instead of being paraphrased. WP:OVERQUOTE and WP:OVERQUOTING both touch on this.
Spot checks:
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The article is missing release information. Album articles commonly have a section on the release and promotion. Even if there's not enough for a full section, the basics should still be included as part of the production. Most pressingly is that the release date isn't found in the body.
No neutrality issues. The article is written in a neutral tone, and no ideas are given undue emphasis.
No recent disputes. The article might benefit from an update over the years if more is written about the album, but that's not urgent and it wouldn't require significant rewrites.
One non-free image with a valid non-free use rationale.
@ Thebiguglyalien: Comments addressed above. I've also added a couple of reviews to the review section. voorts ( talk/ contributions) 22:40, 25 March 2024 (UTC)