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On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to update the first two sentences in the introductory paragraph to give readers a more balanced description of UHG.
Here is the revised text I am suggesting for the first two sentences: "UnitedHealth Group Incorporated is an American multinational health benefits and services company based in Minnetonka, Minnesota. Offering insurance products under UnitedHealthcare, and health care services and care delivery aided by technology and data under Optum, it is the world's eleventh-largest company by revenue and the largest health care company by revenue, and the largest insurance company by net premiums. "
Thank you for updating the introduction! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 20:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
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User:Lewcm, thanks for helping with my last request.
On behalf of UHG, I’d like to submit a request to improve the readability of the long History section in this article by adding the following subheadings.
Thank you for making these changes to improve the readability of the History section! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 19:12, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
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User:Lewcm, thank you very much for helping with the subheadings in the History section.
On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to delete the Products and services section in this article.
Thank you for removing the Products and services section! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 19:31, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Edit request implemented Spintendo 05:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
User:Lewcm, thank you very much for helping with a previous edit to the introduction.
Currently, there is a citation request for a phrase in the introductory text that reads and the largest insurance company by net premiums. On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to remove that phrase as an unsourced and unnecessary detail.
Thank you for updating the introduction! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 17:50, 22 December 2023 (UTC)
This page is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the current talk page. |
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to update the first two sentences in the introductory paragraph to give readers a more balanced description of UHG.
Here is the revised text I am suggesting for the first two sentences: "UnitedHealth Group Incorporated is an American multinational health benefits and services company based in Minnetonka, Minnesota. Offering insurance products under UnitedHealthcare, and health care services and care delivery aided by technology and data under Optum, it is the world's eleventh-largest company by revenue and the largest health care company by revenue, and the largest insurance company by net premiums. "
Thank you for updating the introduction! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 20:30, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
User:Lewcm, thanks for helping with my last request.
On behalf of UHG, I’d like to submit a request to improve the readability of the long History section in this article by adding the following subheadings.
Thank you for making these changes to improve the readability of the History section! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 19:12, 13 December 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
User:Lewcm, thank you very much for helping with the subheadings in the History section.
On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to delete the Products and services section in this article.
Thank you for removing the Products and services section! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 19:31, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Edit request implemented Spintendo 05:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
User:Lewcm, thank you very much for helping with a previous edit to the introduction.
Currently, there is a citation request for a phrase in the introductory text that reads and the largest insurance company by net premiums. On behalf of UHG, I'd like to submit a request to remove that phrase as an unsourced and unnecessary detail.
Thank you for updating the introduction! Barbara at UHG ( talk) 17:50, 22 December 2023 (UTC)