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Intro: "fairytale past" is used two sentences in a row
Production: 'The character of Sheriff Graham was killed off in "The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter", something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.' I think since this is the episode, you could just say, 'In the episode, the character of Sheriff Graham was killed off, something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.'
Reviews: This is just a little pet peeve of mine, but maybe move the blue box up to the top of the first paragraph, because there are three little words that spill over and it bothers me. ;)
References: Reference 6 seems to have a weird bracket issue
Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 20:27, 27 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Hi, thanks for the review. I'll get to fixing these and those in the other GA review tomorrow or Sunday. Thanks, Ruby2010/2013 23:29, 27 April 2012 (UTC)reply
No problem. Will wait till then.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 04:01, 28 April 2012 (UTC)reply
All fixed! I removed the screenshot, as I couldn't find anything to justify its presence. Maybe when I have time I'll try to find a better one. Thanks for the review! Ruby2010/2013 03:10, 30 April 2012 (UTC)reply
OK, all ready to pass! :)--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 03:43, 30 April 2012 (UTC)reply
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Intro: "fairytale past" is used two sentences in a row
Production: 'The character of Sheriff Graham was killed off in "The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter", something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.' I think since this is the episode, you could just say, 'In the episode, the character of Sheriff Graham was killed off, something that actor Jamie Dornan had known would happen since ABC picked up the pilot.'
Reviews: This is just a little pet peeve of mine, but maybe move the blue box up to the top of the first paragraph, because there are three little words that spill over and it bothers me. ;)
References: Reference 6 seems to have a weird bracket issue
Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 20:27, 27 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Hi, thanks for the review. I'll get to fixing these and those in the other GA review tomorrow or Sunday. Thanks, Ruby2010/2013 23:29, 27 April 2012 (UTC)reply
No problem. Will wait till then.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 04:01, 28 April 2012 (UTC)reply
All fixed! I removed the screenshot, as I couldn't find anything to justify its presence. Maybe when I have time I'll try to find a better one. Thanks for the review! Ruby2010/2013 03:10, 30 April 2012 (UTC)reply
OK, all ready to pass! :)--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 03:43, 30 April 2012 (UTC)reply