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Reviewer: Buidhe ( talk · contribs) 03:37, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

  • I would integrate note 1 into the text.
Done. AM
  • "A unique feature of the Sea King II was a tube that ran through the hull to supply air to the 'rear step'" What "rear step"?
Explanation given. AM
  • Lead says "probably", body says "the aircraft exhibited was a modified N60 Baby". Be consistent
Sorted. AM
  • "240 horsepower (180 kW) Siddeley Puma engine" this is not cited anywhere
Cited. AM
  • What is the basis of CC licensing for the archive.org images? Since it's a UK publication I expect both UK and US public domain tags would be necessary (probably {{ PD-UK-unknown}} and {{ PD-1923}}).
Tags added. AM

( t · c) buidhe 03:48, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I've checked a few of the sources and did not find any close paraphrasing, failed verification, or OR issues. The only outstanding issue is image licensing ( t · c) buidhe 09:57, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

Many thanks, Buidhe. Amitchell125 ( talk) 14:15, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Buidhe ( talk · contribs) 03:37, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

  • I would integrate note 1 into the text.
Done. AM
  • "A unique feature of the Sea King II was a tube that ran through the hull to supply air to the 'rear step'" What "rear step"?
Explanation given. AM
  • Lead says "probably", body says "the aircraft exhibited was a modified N60 Baby". Be consistent
Sorted. AM
  • "240 horsepower (180 kW) Siddeley Puma engine" this is not cited anywhere
Cited. AM
  • What is the basis of CC licensing for the archive.org images? Since it's a UK publication I expect both UK and US public domain tags would be necessary (probably {{ PD-UK-unknown}} and {{ PD-1923}}).
Tags added. AM

( t · c) buidhe 03:48, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I've checked a few of the sources and did not find any close paraphrasing, failed verification, or OR issues. The only outstanding issue is image licensing ( t · c) buidhe 09:57, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

Many thanks, Buidhe. Amitchell125 ( talk) 14:15, 22 December 2021 (UTC) reply

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