I'll be reviewing this article. I can't imagine it's going to fail, but all the same, I'll go over it and check everything.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 07:07, 8 October 2022 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Prose is exemplary. A few minor typos, but I fixed them as I read the article.
The lead cuts off after 2003, leaving the rest ambiguous. I've added a sentence on her retirement. In the body, I changed the phrases "gave teeth" and "
you".
The only section of concern is STS-58. It goes into detail about the roles and responsibilities of other members of the crew, which may be unnecessary for this article. After consideration, this information is still brief enough to provide reasonable context.
All images are relevant and have descriptive captions.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
The article meets and exceeds the GA criteria in nearly all areas. I found no issues but a few minor nitpicks that could be fixed immediately, so I've addressed them myself. This article easily passes its good article nomination.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 08:21, 8 October 2022 (UTC)reply
I'll be reviewing this article. I can't imagine it's going to fail, but all the same, I'll go over it and check everything.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 07:07, 8 October 2022 (UTC)reply
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Prose is exemplary. A few minor typos, but I fixed them as I read the article.
The lead cuts off after 2003, leaving the rest ambiguous. I've added a sentence on her retirement. In the body, I changed the phrases "gave teeth" and "
you".
The only section of concern is STS-58. It goes into detail about the roles and responsibilities of other members of the crew, which may be unnecessary for this article. After consideration, this information is still brief enough to provide reasonable context.
All images are relevant and have descriptive captions.
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
The article meets and exceeds the GA criteria in nearly all areas. I found no issues but a few minor nitpicks that could be fixed immediately, so I've addressed them myself. This article easily passes its good article nomination.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 08:21, 8 October 2022 (UTC)reply