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Firstly it’s a shame to nominate a recent GA (passed on 7 June 2015) for reassessment and let me point out that the article hasn't been damaged since then, but was passed with these faults itself.
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Hi please could you replace the television table with this as she is also a producer of shows it’s better to show it in a different way. Also I have gotten rid of guest appearances as she is a famous name.
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And as she was a contestant on Bigg Boss Season 8 (2014) please could you add Category:Bigg Boss (Hindi TV series) contestants References
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2A02:6B68:10:6100:3D54:5F9A:738E:2205 ( talk) 18:23, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
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Please could someone replace the existing info box with this
{{Infobox person
| name = Sargun Mehta
| image = File:Sargun Mehta at a pre-Diwali party.jpg
| imagesize = 230px
| caption = Mehta at [[Ravi Dubey]]'s birthday, 2017
| birth_date = {{Birth date and age|1988|09|06|df=yes}}
| birth_place = [[Chandigarh]], India
| other_names =
| occupation = {{hlist|Actress|model|producer}}
| alma_mater = [[Kirori Mal College]]
| spouse = {{Marriage|[[Ravi Dubey]]|7 December 2013}}<ref name=YWAIL/><ref name="marriage"/><ref name="married-for-sure"/>
| years_active = 2009–present
}}
In introduction could you add, She participated in the reality show, Bigg Boss 8 in 2014. [1] 2A02:6B68:10:6100:D493:F664:F340:FF11 ( talk) 20:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Please add this above sub heading below career heading.
Add this sub heading above where it says In 2012, Mehta was chosen to play the pivotal role of Sonia.
Please add this sub heading above where it says In July 2015, Mehta made her filming debut with
Also please add this below just after the paragraph In mid-November 2014, she quit the show due to creative dissatisfaction.
In September 2014, Mehta participated in the reality show, Bigg Boss 8 as a contestant, but she got eliminated in the first episode itself. [2]
Also please replace File:Sargun Mehta at a pre-Diwali party.jpg in career section where it says In 2018 she portrayed Baani in Qismat, and with this File:Sargun Mehta at Ravi Dubey's birthday, 2017 (cropped).jpg as I want to add the former image in info box. (Please don’t forgot to replace the existing info box with the one I have requested right in the beginning of this request section.
Also in other work section please over here [1]
Replace this Mehta gave a special dance appearance on the grand premiere of the Indian reality show Bigg Boss 8 on 21 September 2014, along with Gautam Gulati and Sukirti Kandpal. [2] Later, on 18 October 2014, she appeared as a special panel member on the show. [3]
With this Mehta appeared as as a special panel member on the show Bigg Boss 8, after getting evicted in the premiere. [4]
As it’s completely false as Mehta was first an contestant which will be added in career section.
And please add heading instead of sub heading as it should not be in career section like how it is here. [2]
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Firstly it’s a shame to nominate a recent GA (passed on 7 June 2015) for reassessment and let me point out that the article hasn't been damaged since then, but was passed with these faults itself.
§§ Dharmadhyaksha§§ { Talk / Edits} 10:14, 19 October 2015 (UTC)
Examples | |
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Actress | Stuff expected about acting |
Katrina Kaif | * "Kaif was written off due to her poor Hindi and thick British accent." * "Katrina Kaif is an eyesore ... her acting so weak you want to urge her to watch everyone from Madhubala to Madhuri so she might pick up a few tricks". * "comes into her own as an actress of substance" * "Katrina Kaif continues to surprise ... She scores in both emotional and light scenes" |
Dimple Kapadia | * "established her as a "cult figure" as she led the fashion trends" * "performed solidly and memorably" *"Dimple showed immense strength as a performer. This has to be one of her best and most unrecognised performances" * "proving her mettle as an actress of intensity and passion" |
Mila Kunis | * "adept with her performance and understands the concept of comic timing" * "generated a spark and brought a degree of determination to her character" "brings some lovely subtle grace notes to a role" |
Evan Rachel Wood | * "Wood does flip cynicism with such precise, easy rhythms and with such obvious pleasure in naughtiness that she's impossible to hate." *"wise beyond her years" and as "one of the best actresses of her generation" *" brings much-needed emotional depth" |
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I want to change he photo with a recent image of sargun Mehta Zaraaaaxxx ( talk) 09:07, 1 March 2022 (UTC)
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Hi please could you replace the television table with this as she is also a producer of shows it’s better to show it in a different way. Also I have gotten rid of guest appearances as she is a famous name.
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TelevisionActress
Producer
And as she was a contestant on Bigg Boss Season 8 (2014) please could you add Category:Bigg Boss (Hindi TV series) contestants References
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2A02:6B68:10:6100:3D54:5F9A:738E:2205 ( talk) 18:23, 21 March 2024 (UTC)
This
edit request has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
Please could someone replace the existing info box with this
{{Infobox person
| name = Sargun Mehta
| image = File:Sargun Mehta at a pre-Diwali party.jpg
| imagesize = 230px
| caption = Mehta at [[Ravi Dubey]]'s birthday, 2017
| birth_date = {{Birth date and age|1988|09|06|df=yes}}
| birth_place = [[Chandigarh]], India
| other_names =
| occupation = {{hlist|Actress|model|producer}}
| alma_mater = [[Kirori Mal College]]
| spouse = {{Marriage|[[Ravi Dubey]]|7 December 2013}}<ref name=YWAIL/><ref name="marriage"/><ref name="married-for-sure"/>
| years_active = 2009–present
}}
In introduction could you add, She participated in the reality show, Bigg Boss 8 in 2014. [1] 2A02:6B68:10:6100:D493:F664:F340:FF11 ( talk) 20:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Please add this above sub heading below career heading.
Add this sub heading above where it says In 2012, Mehta was chosen to play the pivotal role of Sonia.
Please add this sub heading above where it says In July 2015, Mehta made her filming debut with
Also please add this below just after the paragraph In mid-November 2014, she quit the show due to creative dissatisfaction.
In September 2014, Mehta participated in the reality show, Bigg Boss 8 as a contestant, but she got eliminated in the first episode itself. [2]
Also please replace File:Sargun Mehta at a pre-Diwali party.jpg in career section where it says In 2018 she portrayed Baani in Qismat, and with this File:Sargun Mehta at Ravi Dubey's birthday, 2017 (cropped).jpg as I want to add the former image in info box. (Please don’t forgot to replace the existing info box with the one I have requested right in the beginning of this request section.
Also in other work section please over here [1]
Replace this Mehta gave a special dance appearance on the grand premiere of the Indian reality show Bigg Boss 8 on 21 September 2014, along with Gautam Gulati and Sukirti Kandpal. [2] Later, on 18 October 2014, she appeared as a special panel member on the show. [3]
With this Mehta appeared as as a special panel member on the show Bigg Boss 8, after getting evicted in the premiere. [4]
As it’s completely false as Mehta was first an contestant which will be added in career section.
And please add heading instead of sub heading as it should not be in career section like how it is here. [2]
{{
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template is reopened. Thank you for your patience and contributions!
P.I. Ellsworth ,
ed.
put'er there 19:26, 18 April 2024 (UTC)References