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Thanks for the spoiler, Wikipedia. Please bear in mind that other countries (in this case, New Zealand) are not necessarily as far along in the series as the US (I presume the main source of knowledge for this article), and as we are currently only in the seventh season, reading about the season eight proposal was an unwelcome surprise. However, I'm not a proficient Wiki-editor, so I shall leave this open to regular users as to whether it needs correcting or not. MZ.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 121.72.1.145 ( talk) 09:48, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
"In the CBS character profiles, it is said that Sara is an only child yet in an episode of CSI Sara says to Gil Grissom that she once found a bag of weed under her "brother's" bed and ratted him out to their parents, even though CBS also state that her parents are "ex-hippies"."
If I'm not mistaken, she also went into foster care, so she could have been referring to a foster brother. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.96.242.143 ( talk)
In one episode, Grissom was doing an experiment with raw meat and flies, and Sara states that she is a vegetarian. Does anyone know the episode she says this, and can someone add it to the trivia section? I'm pretty sure it was in Season 1. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.26.185.97 ( talk)
Episode you're lookin for was Season 2: Burden of Proof. Also, Trivia Sections Should Be Avoided. if you can't say it inline, please don't add one. -- Ipstenu ( talk| contribs) 22:10, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
Oh boy, what's up with this trivia section? I mean really: "Generally she wears slacks and tops, but is a little more casual than Catherine." Time for a little trivia Stalinism, I think. Editus Reloaded 19:43, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
Who are these people that are changing the status? It's annoying.-- Rory666 01:54, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Do you think that sarah might have been under care of the minature killer? It would explain the comment "he loved you better" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.92.67.13 ( talk) 21:26, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
Sara: I know that Ernie loved you, he would have not wanted you to do this Natalie: Ernie loved me more than Grissom could ever love you Sara: Grissom? oh i know what this is aboout blablba...*dozes off* then wakes up under car etc. Hope this answers your question! Yamanbaiia 21:41, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
This article could stand to be rewritten to make it look more like the Grissom article and less like an article on a fan site. Any critical commentary on the relationship or on Sara that we could cite? -- Bookworm857158367 12:06, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
This should be entirely rewritten, we all agree. We don't need to know everything Sidle has done over the las 8 years. Like, it's written the fact that she has a brother, there's no need of explaining WHY we know that she has a brother, just a REF to the episode and the phrase " she has a brother". Or again, the fact that she doesn't rememeber the face of the social worker that took her to foster care? just: "she was in foster care" is enough, with paragraphs like that this will never be GA quality. Yamanbaiia 14:49, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
There are a number of issues that need fixing before I promote this article, mostly involving referencing.
1) Many of the references do not have a retrieval date. All electronic references need one.
2) I never thought I would say this, but this article has too many footnotes. There is no reason to have more than one footnote per sentence unless the topic is controverial. Sara Sidle is not controversial. Please consolidate the footnotes. The amount of them is distracting when reading the article.
3) While most of the article has too many footnotes, the video games section needs one.
4) Many footnotes have a period after them, a period before and after, or a space in front. They need to all be after the period with no space in front.
5) The lead is too short and does not act as a 'mirror' of the article. It should contain information about the public reaction to the character, her character development and more information about her relationship with Gil. Ideally, the lead should be like a minuaturized version of the whole article, containing roughly the same information in a much briefer format.
6) I would strongly suggest you get a better picture for the user box. The current picture is extremely dark, and makes it very difficult to see Sara's face. It should be relatively easier to find one with better lighting.
7) I would also recommend consolidating some of the one-line paragraphs. Short paragraphs make reading choppy, and make the article flow poorly. For example, instead of having three paragraphs in the 'Early Life' section, one paragraph would make the section read much better.
Please contact me if you have any questions. Zeus1234 20:58, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
The photo is fine now. Just get rid of the double footnotes, which should not be too difficult. I'd do it myself, but as a reviewer I can't. Afterwards, I'll promote the article. Zeus1234 20:39, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
, i changed the caption, and i also removed the youtube links. About the blogs, they are interviews, not someone's personal opinions, so i don't see the problem. Aaaaand about GSR.com feel free to write any comment about it, i am not going to because i'll probably get carried away, poor User:Bookworm857158367 will go crazy copy-editing and the public reaction will again be what it shoudn't, a fan section. I hope this is good enough. Yamanbaiia 20:24, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
It is unlikely that Sara took Grissom's last name - her csi uniform still bears the name "Sidle". The "Mrs Grissom" comment was presumably to indicate her relationship to the Grissom-obsessed person she was questioning. Rmd1023 ( talk) 15:36, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
It will not keep the GA honour if blog references and creative writing about the GSR relationship is allowed to remain. I have removed some, and will try to watch to prevent this from happening again. Trista TristaBella ( talk) 02:14, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
It was revealed in Season 10, Episode 2, that Sara Side, after marrying Gil Grissom, takes the Grissom family name. Shouldn't we rewrite everything using Grissom as Sara's last name?? -- DisneyCSIfan ( talk) 21:39, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
Please make their marragie work!! Do not let them sepearte. They are one fo the best of the show!! Please keep them together!! Thank You!
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GA from 2007. There are sourcing issues: some sentences are either unsourced or sourced by unreliable sources. I also doubt the character's notability overall, because the reliable sources I found on Google and in the article talks more about the actor than the character herself. Spinixster (chat!) 08:15, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
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Thanks for the spoiler, Wikipedia. Please bear in mind that other countries (in this case, New Zealand) are not necessarily as far along in the series as the US (I presume the main source of knowledge for this article), and as we are currently only in the seventh season, reading about the season eight proposal was an unwelcome surprise. However, I'm not a proficient Wiki-editor, so I shall leave this open to regular users as to whether it needs correcting or not. MZ.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 121.72.1.145 ( talk) 09:48, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
"In the CBS character profiles, it is said that Sara is an only child yet in an episode of CSI Sara says to Gil Grissom that she once found a bag of weed under her "brother's" bed and ratted him out to their parents, even though CBS also state that her parents are "ex-hippies"."
If I'm not mistaken, she also went into foster care, so she could have been referring to a foster brother. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.96.242.143 ( talk)
In one episode, Grissom was doing an experiment with raw meat and flies, and Sara states that she is a vegetarian. Does anyone know the episode she says this, and can someone add it to the trivia section? I'm pretty sure it was in Season 1. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.26.185.97 ( talk)
Episode you're lookin for was Season 2: Burden of Proof. Also, Trivia Sections Should Be Avoided. if you can't say it inline, please don't add one. -- Ipstenu ( talk| contribs) 22:10, 29 April 2007 (UTC)
Oh boy, what's up with this trivia section? I mean really: "Generally she wears slacks and tops, but is a little more casual than Catherine." Time for a little trivia Stalinism, I think. Editus Reloaded 19:43, 3 June 2007 (UTC)
Who are these people that are changing the status? It's annoying.-- Rory666 01:54, 4 October 2007 (UTC)
Do you think that sarah might have been under care of the minature killer? It would explain the comment "he loved you better" —Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.92.67.13 ( talk) 21:26, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
Sara: I know that Ernie loved you, he would have not wanted you to do this Natalie: Ernie loved me more than Grissom could ever love you Sara: Grissom? oh i know what this is aboout blablba...*dozes off* then wakes up under car etc. Hope this answers your question! Yamanbaiia 21:41, 8 October 2007 (UTC)
This article could stand to be rewritten to make it look more like the Grissom article and less like an article on a fan site. Any critical commentary on the relationship or on Sara that we could cite? -- Bookworm857158367 12:06, 9 October 2007 (UTC)
This should be entirely rewritten, we all agree. We don't need to know everything Sidle has done over the las 8 years. Like, it's written the fact that she has a brother, there's no need of explaining WHY we know that she has a brother, just a REF to the episode and the phrase " she has a brother". Or again, the fact that she doesn't rememeber the face of the social worker that took her to foster care? just: "she was in foster care" is enough, with paragraphs like that this will never be GA quality. Yamanbaiia 14:49, 11 October 2007 (UTC)
There are a number of issues that need fixing before I promote this article, mostly involving referencing.
1) Many of the references do not have a retrieval date. All electronic references need one.
2) I never thought I would say this, but this article has too many footnotes. There is no reason to have more than one footnote per sentence unless the topic is controverial. Sara Sidle is not controversial. Please consolidate the footnotes. The amount of them is distracting when reading the article.
3) While most of the article has too many footnotes, the video games section needs one.
4) Many footnotes have a period after them, a period before and after, or a space in front. They need to all be after the period with no space in front.
5) The lead is too short and does not act as a 'mirror' of the article. It should contain information about the public reaction to the character, her character development and more information about her relationship with Gil. Ideally, the lead should be like a minuaturized version of the whole article, containing roughly the same information in a much briefer format.
6) I would strongly suggest you get a better picture for the user box. The current picture is extremely dark, and makes it very difficult to see Sara's face. It should be relatively easier to find one with better lighting.
7) I would also recommend consolidating some of the one-line paragraphs. Short paragraphs make reading choppy, and make the article flow poorly. For example, instead of having three paragraphs in the 'Early Life' section, one paragraph would make the section read much better.
Please contact me if you have any questions. Zeus1234 20:58, 21 October 2007 (UTC)
The photo is fine now. Just get rid of the double footnotes, which should not be too difficult. I'd do it myself, but as a reviewer I can't. Afterwards, I'll promote the article. Zeus1234 20:39, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
, i changed the caption, and i also removed the youtube links. About the blogs, they are interviews, not someone's personal opinions, so i don't see the problem. Aaaaand about GSR.com feel free to write any comment about it, i am not going to because i'll probably get carried away, poor User:Bookworm857158367 will go crazy copy-editing and the public reaction will again be what it shoudn't, a fan section. I hope this is good enough. Yamanbaiia 20:24, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
It is unlikely that Sara took Grissom's last name - her csi uniform still bears the name "Sidle". The "Mrs Grissom" comment was presumably to indicate her relationship to the Grissom-obsessed person she was questioning. Rmd1023 ( talk) 15:36, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
It will not keep the GA honour if blog references and creative writing about the GSR relationship is allowed to remain. I have removed some, and will try to watch to prevent this from happening again. Trista TristaBella ( talk) 02:14, 28 June 2010 (UTC)
It was revealed in Season 10, Episode 2, that Sara Side, after marrying Gil Grissom, takes the Grissom family name. Shouldn't we rewrite everything using Grissom as Sara's last name?? -- DisneyCSIfan ( talk) 21:39, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
Please make their marragie work!! Do not let them sepearte. They are one fo the best of the show!! Please keep them together!! Thank You!
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GA from 2007. There are sourcing issues: some sentences are either unsourced or sourced by unreliable sources. I also doubt the character's notability overall, because the reliable sources I found on Google and in the article talks more about the actor than the character herself. Spinixster (chat!) 08:15, 5 July 2023 (UTC)