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Nominator: PizzaKing13 ( talk · contribs) 08:36, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 08:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll review this within the next few days.
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Lead:
rank promotionsand
lawyersare mentioned below, but there are no issues unique to the lead.
Early life:
Education:
Merino continued some studies during his service in the Salvadoran Navy– "some studies" is unclear. Was he working toward something like a degree or certification?
to become a member of the naval staff– What does "naval staff" mean in this context? Was there a specific position or career track he wanted?
Military service:
Security policies:
a similar spike of homicides occurred when 87 homicides– Redundant use of homicides
which suspended some constitutional rights– This makes it sound like the homicides themselves suspended constitutional rights instead of the government.
Involvement in 9f:
Rank promotions:
Lawyers argued that Merino's promotion was illegal– What lawyers? Were they affiliated with any political group?
COVID-19 pandemic:
Merino announced exceptions to the lockdown orders– Were these his exceptions, or was he just reporting Bukele's decision?
He also questioned the National Republican Alliance's proposal to implement quarantines within the country's municipalities– What was he implying here? Was he just accusing them of hypocrisy? Or did he believe they had some ulterior motive?
Personal life:
of having given favors to his son– What kind of favors?
Spot checks:
"explain [Bukele's] political act"quotes the source even though
political actis in itself a quote.
Main aspects:
Out of scope:
No neutrality issues. The article uses a neutral tone and gives due weight to each aspect.
No recent disputes. Some updates will be necessary, but the present content isn't going to need to be significantly changed.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Nominator: PizzaKing13 ( talk · contribs) 08:36, 13 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 08:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I'll review this within the next few days.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 08:46, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
Lead:
rank promotionsand
lawyersare mentioned below, but there are no issues unique to the lead.
Early life:
Education:
Merino continued some studies during his service in the Salvadoran Navy– "some studies" is unclear. Was he working toward something like a degree or certification?
to become a member of the naval staff– What does "naval staff" mean in this context? Was there a specific position or career track he wanted?
Military service:
Security policies:
a similar spike of homicides occurred when 87 homicides– Redundant use of homicides
which suspended some constitutional rights– This makes it sound like the homicides themselves suspended constitutional rights instead of the government.
Involvement in 9f:
Rank promotions:
Lawyers argued that Merino's promotion was illegal– What lawyers? Were they affiliated with any political group?
COVID-19 pandemic:
Merino announced exceptions to the lockdown orders– Were these his exceptions, or was he just reporting Bukele's decision?
He also questioned the National Republican Alliance's proposal to implement quarantines within the country's municipalities– What was he implying here? Was he just accusing them of hypocrisy? Or did he believe they had some ulterior motive?
Personal life:
of having given favors to his son– What kind of favors?
Spot checks:
"explain [Bukele's] political act"quotes the source even though
political actis in itself a quote.
Main aspects:
Out of scope:
No neutrality issues. The article uses a neutral tone and gives due weight to each aspect.
No recent disputes. Some updates will be necessary, but the present content isn't going to need to be significantly changed.