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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 17:01, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
I should have a review for this posted some time today.
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Pseud 14, I've posted the review below. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 21:10, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
with a show title called– Can this be reworded? "title called" feels off.
revealed her uncertaintyshould be reworded.
This one might be my lastmakes sense, but it's unclear what
And more importantly, if people would still want to see me in a concert like [this] four years from nowis referring to.
The concert was aired as a television special– This would still be correct without "was". It would just change it from passive to active.
All sources appear to be reliable.
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During rehearsals and preparations for the show, she revealed her uncertainty staging an arena concert for its physical demands and cost.
Reception is not covered in the article. Surely someone commented on her performance, in English, Filipino, or otherwise.
No neutrality issues.
No disputes, no reason the article will need to be rewritten in the near future.
The image has a valid non-free use rationale and a suitable caption.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 17:01, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
I should have a review for this posted some time today.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 17:01, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
Pseud 14, I've posted the review below. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 21:10, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
with a show title called– Can this be reworded? "title called" feels off.
revealed her uncertaintyshould be reworded.
This one might be my lastmakes sense, but it's unclear what
And more importantly, if people would still want to see me in a concert like [this] four years from nowis referring to.
The concert was aired as a television special– This would still be correct without "was". It would just change it from passive to active.
All sources appear to be reliable.
Spot checks:
During rehearsals and preparations for the show, she revealed her uncertainty staging an arena concert for its physical demands and cost.
Reception is not covered in the article. Surely someone commented on her performance, in English, Filipino, or otherwise.
No neutrality issues.
No disputes, no reason the article will need to be rewritten in the near future.
The image has a valid non-free use rationale and a suitable caption.