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Given that a more comprehensive treatment of "qigong fever" is already in the Qigong history article and summarized in the Qigong article, I suggest that the Qigong fever article simply provide a well-written summary. As such, I provided an initial draft summary and removed text, currently in need of significant editing, provided below for review, discussion, and rewrite. I suggest that some of this text may be appropriate in the Qigong history article, with a solid rewrite.
TheProfessor ( talk) 13:42, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
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Dear all, in the original stub I was careful to check the Qigong history and made sure that the information does not repeat itself. As of the day, the summary does not provide referencing for individual statements and numbers, which I did my best to provide. Do you really consider the article in its present state as "improved"?-- Shanghainese.ua ( talk) 15:03, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
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Given that a more comprehensive treatment of "qigong fever" is already in the Qigong history article and summarized in the Qigong article, I suggest that the Qigong fever article simply provide a well-written summary. As such, I provided an initial draft summary and removed text, currently in need of significant editing, provided below for review, discussion, and rewrite. I suggest that some of this text may be appropriate in the Qigong history article, with a solid rewrite.
TheProfessor ( talk) 13:42, 20 December 2014 (UTC)
References
Dear all, in the original stub I was careful to check the Qigong history and made sure that the information does not repeat itself. As of the day, the summary does not provide referencing for individual statements and numbers, which I did my best to provide. Do you really consider the article in its present state as "improved"?-- Shanghainese.ua ( talk) 15:03, 2 January 2015 (UTC)