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Plot: "hallucinating pouring over a blonde stripper" I assume the word 'blood' is supposed to go in there somewhere
Plot: "formed of retired" I would say 'from' instead of 'of'. If you want of, used the word 'comprised' instead of 'formed'
Plot: I would use a different word besides 'spooks'
Production: Comma after "Ruby Tipm"
Production: "Millennium received higher viewing figures during its first season that The X-Files had done" 'that' should be 'then'
Those are the only problems I can find. On hold for seven days.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 16:15, 14 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks for looking at this one for me. I think I've addressed everything you've raised here, let me know if there's anything else you think needs seen to.
GRAPPLEX 23:14, 14 April 2012 (UTC)reply
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Plot: "hallucinating pouring over a blonde stripper" I assume the word 'blood' is supposed to go in there somewhere
Plot: "formed of retired" I would say 'from' instead of 'of'. If you want of, used the word 'comprised' instead of 'formed'
Plot: I would use a different word besides 'spooks'
Production: Comma after "Ruby Tipm"
Production: "Millennium received higher viewing figures during its first season that The X-Files had done" 'that' should be 'then'
Those are the only problems I can find. On hold for seven days.--
Gen. Quon (
talk) 16:15, 14 April 2012 (UTC)reply
Thanks for looking at this one for me. I think I've addressed everything you've raised here, let me know if there's anything else you think needs seen to.
GRAPPLEX 23:14, 14 April 2012 (UTC)reply