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Article reads too much like an eulogy

This article would be better off citing more sources, or if none are available, describing the facts of Dr Hennis' life more dispassionately. Mihirpmehta ( talk) 14:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC) reply

  • I reworded the opening to be more neutral and use language that better conforms to NPOV. There is probably more work to do in the body of the article. John Pack Lambert ( talk) 18:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Article reads too much like an eulogy

This article would be better off citing more sources, or if none are available, describing the facts of Dr Hennis' life more dispassionately. Mihirpmehta ( talk) 14:11, 28 August 2016 (UTC) reply

  • I reworded the opening to be more neutral and use language that better conforms to NPOV. There is probably more work to do in the body of the article. John Pack Lambert ( talk) 18:43, 9 May 2024 (UTC) reply

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