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Reviewer: Sims2aholic8 ( talk · contribs) 12:02, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Taking on this article for review. Will read through the article over the next couple of days and provide my commentary in the table below. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:02, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Have reviewed article against some of the sections below, will continue to review over the coming days. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:48, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
@ VickKiang: I have added some additional comments/replies to some of the points addressed, as well as new points from the recent edits from other users. There are still outstanding points below which require addressing. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:04, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
@ VickKiang: I have flagged in the below the issues which still require addressing. Please ensure these are covered off at your earliest convenience. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:39, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | No issues here | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. | * "for a total of $41,076,708" in "Box office" has no ref
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | No instances of copyvio or plagiarism detected. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Happy that the main aspects of the subject have been covered broadly. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Happy that this point is covered adequately. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | No issues here. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | No notes. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | No notes. | |
7. Overall assessment. | Assessment now complete. Several areas remain outstanding against the GA criteria as outlined above, particularly around prose, sourcing and OR. Placing this review on hold to allow the nominator time to enact any changes I have suggested above. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:41, 23 March 2023 (UTC) |
This GA review has now been ongoing for a month, and still a number of the issues I presented have not been addressed. I will give this another week to be resolved, otherwise I will close the review as a fail. Pinging VickKiang for awareness. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:20, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for continuing to work on this article. I am completing one final review of the whole article and will list any additional points which need to be addressed below.
My Neighbor Totoro has grossed over $41 million worldwide at the box office as of September 2019; the film also grossed significantly more from home video sales and merchandise.Is this acceptable? VickKiang (talk) 07:32, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
Totoro has made cameo appearances in many Studio Ghibli films, including Pom Poko, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Whisper of the Heart. The character has also appeared in other anime series and films, including one episode of the Gainax television series His and Her Circumstances. Miyazaki uses Totoro as a part of his logo for Studio Ghibli. Totoro also makes a cameo appearance in the Pixar film Toy Story 3 (2010) but was not included in Toy Story 4 due to licensing problems. Toy Story 3's art director Daisuke Tsutsumi is married to Miyazaki's niece, who inspired the character Mei in My Neighbor Totoro) that supports it, but either way it seems quite minor and not of due weight for lede inclusion. VickKiang (talk) 06:48, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Every other section of the article is now fully compliant with the GA criteria. Once these points have been addressed I will be happy to promote this article to GA. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 19:50, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Totoro has made cameo appearances in many Studio Ghibli films, including Pom Poko, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Whisper of the Heart. The character has also appeared in other anime series and films, including one episode of the Gainax television series His and Her Circumstances. Miyazaki uses Totoro as a part of his logo for Studio Ghibli. Totoro also makes a cameo appearance in the Pixar film Toy Story 3 (2010) but was not included in Toy Story 4 due to licensing problems. Toy Story 3's art director Daisuke Tsutsumi is married to Miyazaki's niece, who inspired the character Mei in My Neighbor Totoro) that supports it, but either way it seems quite minor and not of due weight for lede inclusion. VickKiang (talk) 06:48, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
in 1989, just a year after its original debut, Totoro was adapted for English audiences by Streamline Pictures. The movie was exclusive to transatlantic passengers flying with Japan Airlinesinstead of in 1988, so I've changed the date here as well. VickKiang (talk) 11:15, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sims2aholic8 ( talk · contribs) 12:02, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Taking on this article for review. Will read through the article over the next couple of days and provide my commentary in the table below. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:02, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
Have reviewed article against some of the sections below, will continue to review over the coming days. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:48, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
@ VickKiang: I have added some additional comments/replies to some of the points addressed, as well as new points from the recent edits from other users. There are still outstanding points below which require addressing. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:04, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
@ VickKiang: I have flagged in the below the issues which still require addressing. Please ensure these are covered off at your earliest convenience. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 21:39, 1 April 2023 (UTC)
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | No issues here | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
| |
2c. it contains no original research. | * "for a total of $41,076,708" in "Box office" has no ref
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2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | No instances of copyvio or plagiarism detected. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Happy that the main aspects of the subject have been covered broadly. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Happy that this point is covered adequately. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | No issues here. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | No notes. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | No notes. | |
7. Overall assessment. | Assessment now complete. Several areas remain outstanding against the GA criteria as outlined above, particularly around prose, sourcing and OR. Placing this review on hold to allow the nominator time to enact any changes I have suggested above. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 12:41, 23 March 2023 (UTC) |
This GA review has now been ongoing for a month, and still a number of the issues I presented have not been addressed. I will give this another week to be resolved, otherwise I will close the review as a fail. Pinging VickKiang for awareness. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 08:20, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for continuing to work on this article. I am completing one final review of the whole article and will list any additional points which need to be addressed below.
My Neighbor Totoro has grossed over $41 million worldwide at the box office as of September 2019; the film also grossed significantly more from home video sales and merchandise.Is this acceptable? VickKiang (talk) 07:32, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
Totoro has made cameo appearances in many Studio Ghibli films, including Pom Poko, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Whisper of the Heart. The character has also appeared in other anime series and films, including one episode of the Gainax television series His and Her Circumstances. Miyazaki uses Totoro as a part of his logo for Studio Ghibli. Totoro also makes a cameo appearance in the Pixar film Toy Story 3 (2010) but was not included in Toy Story 4 due to licensing problems. Toy Story 3's art director Daisuke Tsutsumi is married to Miyazaki's niece, who inspired the character Mei in My Neighbor Totoro) that supports it, but either way it seems quite minor and not of due weight for lede inclusion. VickKiang (talk) 06:48, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
Every other section of the article is now fully compliant with the GA criteria. Once these points have been addressed I will be happy to promote this article to GA. Sims2aholic8 ( talk) 19:50, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Totoro has made cameo appearances in many Studio Ghibli films, including Pom Poko, Kiki's Delivery Service, and Whisper of the Heart. The character has also appeared in other anime series and films, including one episode of the Gainax television series His and Her Circumstances. Miyazaki uses Totoro as a part of his logo for Studio Ghibli. Totoro also makes a cameo appearance in the Pixar film Toy Story 3 (2010) but was not included in Toy Story 4 due to licensing problems. Toy Story 3's art director Daisuke Tsutsumi is married to Miyazaki's niece, who inspired the character Mei in My Neighbor Totoro) that supports it, but either way it seems quite minor and not of due weight for lede inclusion. VickKiang (talk) 06:48, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
in 1989, just a year after its original debut, Totoro was adapted for English audiences by Streamline Pictures. The movie was exclusive to transatlantic passengers flying with Japan Airlinesinstead of in 1988, so I've changed the date here as well. VickKiang (talk) 11:15, 6 June 2023 (UTC)