The prose/writing is fine. But the article structure seems very confusing and unprofessional--
“International career” and “domestic career” sections do not make sense! —Why is 2016 domestic achievements after 2019 World Cup? All his career highlights should be chronologically listed.
“Injury problems” subsection contains non-injury related info.
“Personal life” section should be separate from “early life” and placed later in the article.
“Playing style” should be merged into a “career” section.
“Records and achievements” would look better either in paragraphs or wikitable, not bullet points.
Lack of article stability: update required? I’m no cricket expert, maybe someone else can shed a light on whether this article contains the subject’s latest career stats.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
Another photo of the subject from his early life, if one is available, would be lovely.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I'll try to fix stuff to the best of my ability. The last thing I want to do is to delist this or any GA. I have reached out to the nominator and major editors, and let's get this article back to GA standards!
Obviously abandoned. In two minds on this. I don't think it is terribly out of date as not much cricket (or sport in general) has been played this year. I don't like the prose though. Seeing as this has been left in limbo for so long I am going to close as no consensus. If another editor is willing to take on a GA reassessment they are welcome to
AIRcorn(talk) 21:56, 22 October 2020 (UTC)reply
The prose/writing is fine. But the article structure seems very confusing and unprofessional--
“International career” and “domestic career” sections do not make sense! —Why is 2016 domestic achievements after 2019 World Cup? All his career highlights should be chronologically listed.
“Injury problems” subsection contains non-injury related info.
“Personal life” section should be separate from “early life” and placed later in the article.
“Playing style” should be merged into a “career” section.
“Records and achievements” would look better either in paragraphs or wikitable, not bullet points.
Lack of article stability: update required? I’m no cricket expert, maybe someone else can shed a light on whether this article contains the subject’s latest career stats.
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
Another photo of the subject from his early life, if one is available, would be lovely.
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
I'll try to fix stuff to the best of my ability. The last thing I want to do is to delist this or any GA. I have reached out to the nominator and major editors, and let's get this article back to GA standards!
Obviously abandoned. In two minds on this. I don't think it is terribly out of date as not much cricket (or sport in general) has been played this year. I don't like the prose though. Seeing as this has been left in limbo for so long I am going to close as no consensus. If another editor is willing to take on a GA reassessment they are welcome to
AIRcorn(talk) 21:56, 22 October 2020 (UTC)reply