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With the research that we did, we decided to add information to the article music anhedonia. Some parts of the article that was previously there before, we started editing, we had to take off due to the absence of citations. Also, during our edits, we focused more on music Anhedonia being a condition and how it affects the brain. The overall main changes that we made to the article was adding new information that correlated with the already existing article. We also added new citations and fixed previous citation issues. When moving our information to mainspace it was very crucial that all the information from the previous article and the new changes we were making would add up and flow smoothly together. Our group made sure to add sources from scholarly articles/journals/websites that gave scientifical background for this condition. We also took out some information that didn't make sense or were repetitive and further explained more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by LylaU17 ( talk • contribs) 04:55, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
I have done some copy editing on the article. Rightly or wrongly, I have also removed the "needs copy editing" template. Feel free to re-instate the template if you feel further editing is required. Mike Marchmont ( talk) 14:47, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 February 2019 and 3 May 2019. Further details are available
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AnnieAbey01.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 01:19, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
With the research that we did, we decided to add information to the article music anhedonia. Some parts of the article that was previously there before, we started editing, we had to take off due to the absence of citations. Also, during our edits, we focused more on music Anhedonia being a condition and how it affects the brain. The overall main changes that we made to the article was adding new information that correlated with the already existing article. We also added new citations and fixed previous citation issues. When moving our information to mainspace it was very crucial that all the information from the previous article and the new changes we were making would add up and flow smoothly together. Our group made sure to add sources from scholarly articles/journals/websites that gave scientifical background for this condition. We also took out some information that didn't make sense or were repetitive and further explained more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by LylaU17 ( talk • contribs) 04:55, 30 March 2019 (UTC)
I have done some copy editing on the article. Rightly or wrongly, I have also removed the "needs copy editing" template. Feel free to re-instate the template if you feel further editing is required. Mike Marchmont ( talk) 14:47, 5 January 2021 (UTC)