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Mount Conard, Mount Diller, Diamond Peak (mountain), Brokeoff Volcano, Brokeoff Mountain
The article Lassen Volcanic National Park#Volcanoes rise gives a different version of events concerning Mt. Tehama / Lassen Peak than this article does-shouldn't they match?
Marcia Wright ( talk) 05:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
Reviewer: WTF? ( talk) 17:44, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
Article looks reasonably good now. One minor issue remains. In the lead, the sentence, "The few hikers that summit this mountain each year are treated to amazing views of Lassen Peak, the Central Valley of California, and many of the park's other features." seems to not follow WP:NPOV guidelines, as it's mostly an opinion. Though, I would think that most people would probably agree with the assertion, it's still an opinion. Also, it mentions, "the relatively few hikers", but the recreation section goes on to state that hiking is a very popular activity in the summer, implying that more than a few reach the summit. So, if this statement could be fixed somehow, I think the article could be promoted. Cheers! WTF? ( talk) 17:01, 21 June 2010 (UTC)
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Mount Conard, Mount Diller, Diamond Peak (mountain), Brokeoff Volcano, Brokeoff Mountain
The article Lassen Volcanic National Park#Volcanoes rise gives a different version of events concerning Mt. Tehama / Lassen Peak than this article does-shouldn't they match?
Marcia Wright ( talk) 05:55, 18 July 2008 (UTC)
Reviewer: WTF? ( talk) 17:44, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
Article looks reasonably good now. One minor issue remains. In the lead, the sentence, "The few hikers that summit this mountain each year are treated to amazing views of Lassen Peak, the Central Valley of California, and many of the park's other features." seems to not follow WP:NPOV guidelines, as it's mostly an opinion. Though, I would think that most people would probably agree with the assertion, it's still an opinion. Also, it mentions, "the relatively few hikers", but the recreation section goes on to state that hiking is a very popular activity in the summer, implying that more than a few reach the summit. So, if this statement could be fixed somehow, I think the article could be promoted. Cheers! WTF? ( talk) 17:01, 21 June 2010 (UTC)