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Reviewer: Aria1561 ( talk · contribs) 21:10, 22 December 2022 (UTC) reply

The last of the GLX to be reviewed for GA status, and I will be more than delighted to review it. I will have my thoughts ready within the next 7 days. Aria1561 ( talk) 21:10, 22 December 2022 (UTC) reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

· · ·


Lead

  • located at College Avenue in Medford, Massachusetts – prose states otherwise, stating that it is located off Boston Avenue near College Avenue. I suggest changing the sentence in the lead to represent what is stated in the prose, especially since the entrance is located on Boston Avenue and not College Avenue.
    •  Done
  • Would it be worth mentioning in the lead that Medford/Tufts serves as the northern terminus for the Green Line E branch?
    •  Done

Station design

  • The platform is 8 inches (200 mm) high for accessible boarding on current light rail vehicles (LRVs), and can be raised to 14 inches (360 mm) for level boarding with Type 9 and Type 10 LRVs – should be changed to raised to 14 inches (360 mm) for future level boarding for consistency with other GLX articles as well as what is stated in the source.
    •  Done

Railroad stations

  • the Public Utilities Commission approved a vast set of cuts to Boston and Maine Railroad commuter service – add B&M abbreviation since it is used later in this section (consistency with other abbreviations used in the article).
    •  Done (by virtue of adding a new sentence higher up)

Previous plans

  • the BERy indicated plans to built three additional radial subways – change "built" to "build".
    •  Done
  • one paralleling the Midland Branch through Dorchester – add link to Dorchester, Boston.
    •  Done
  • Consideration was also given to extension past North Cambridge over the Lexington Branch – add link to Lexington Branch.
    •  Done
  • These included an extension from Lechmere to Woburn over the Southern Division – remove link to Woburn as the town was already linked in the previous paragraph.
    •  Done
  • it would have a branch following the Southern Division to Arlington or Woburn – add link to Arlington, Massachusetts.
    •  Done

Station planning

  • and the ability to avoid modifiying the College Avenue and Winthrop Street bridges – change "modifiying" to "modifying".
    •  Done
  • and was thus not supported by MassDOT – add link to MassDOT.
    •  Done

Redesign

  • No notes.

Construction

  • No notes.

Images

  • Looks good, no notes.

References

  • Ref 74 is currently dead and needs to be archived.
    •  Done

Overall

@ Pi.1415926535: Brilliantly written article, only a couple small issues that need fixing and this article will be good to go for GA status. On hold for 7 days. Aria1561 ( talk) 01:57, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply
@ Aria1561: Thanks for the review! All comments are addressed. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 04:39, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply
Excellent! Passing now. Aria1561 ( talk) 05:11, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Aria1561 ( talk · contribs) 21:10, 22 December 2022 (UTC) reply

The last of the GLX to be reviewed for GA status, and I will be more than delighted to review it. I will have my thoughts ready within the next 7 days. Aria1561 ( talk) 21:10, 22 December 2022 (UTC) reply

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

· · ·


Lead

  • located at College Avenue in Medford, Massachusetts – prose states otherwise, stating that it is located off Boston Avenue near College Avenue. I suggest changing the sentence in the lead to represent what is stated in the prose, especially since the entrance is located on Boston Avenue and not College Avenue.
    •  Done
  • Would it be worth mentioning in the lead that Medford/Tufts serves as the northern terminus for the Green Line E branch?
    •  Done

Station design

  • The platform is 8 inches (200 mm) high for accessible boarding on current light rail vehicles (LRVs), and can be raised to 14 inches (360 mm) for level boarding with Type 9 and Type 10 LRVs – should be changed to raised to 14 inches (360 mm) for future level boarding for consistency with other GLX articles as well as what is stated in the source.
    •  Done

Railroad stations

  • the Public Utilities Commission approved a vast set of cuts to Boston and Maine Railroad commuter service – add B&M abbreviation since it is used later in this section (consistency with other abbreviations used in the article).
    •  Done (by virtue of adding a new sentence higher up)

Previous plans

  • the BERy indicated plans to built three additional radial subways – change "built" to "build".
    •  Done
  • one paralleling the Midland Branch through Dorchester – add link to Dorchester, Boston.
    •  Done
  • Consideration was also given to extension past North Cambridge over the Lexington Branch – add link to Lexington Branch.
    •  Done
  • These included an extension from Lechmere to Woburn over the Southern Division – remove link to Woburn as the town was already linked in the previous paragraph.
    •  Done
  • it would have a branch following the Southern Division to Arlington or Woburn – add link to Arlington, Massachusetts.
    •  Done

Station planning

  • and the ability to avoid modifiying the College Avenue and Winthrop Street bridges – change "modifiying" to "modifying".
    •  Done
  • and was thus not supported by MassDOT – add link to MassDOT.
    •  Done

Redesign

  • No notes.

Construction

  • No notes.

Images

  • Looks good, no notes.

References

  • Ref 74 is currently dead and needs to be archived.
    •  Done

Overall

@ Pi.1415926535: Brilliantly written article, only a couple small issues that need fixing and this article will be good to go for GA status. On hold for 7 days. Aria1561 ( talk) 01:57, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply
@ Aria1561: Thanks for the review! All comments are addressed. Pi.1415926535 ( talk) 04:39, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply
Excellent! Passing now. Aria1561 ( talk) 05:11, 24 December 2022 (UTC) reply

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