"from St James' Park at " the academy don't play there.
Looks like this has been done.
EchetusXe 01:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
"Born in Ashington, Northumberland..." this para has seven sentences, six of which start with "He..." mix it up, merge a bit, and throw in the odd "Cullen" instead of he.
Okay I've actioned on those now. Thanks.
EchetusXe 01:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
You're still using nicknames without introducing them. Who knows what "Shakers" or "Bantams" means without saying what they mean? Personally I'd stick with the club names, this is, after all, an encyclopedia.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:42, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Okay I have removed the nicknames.--
EchetusXe 21:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
"from St James' Park at " the academy don't play there.
Looks like this has been done.
EchetusXe 01:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
"Born in Ashington, Northumberland..." this para has seven sentences, six of which start with "He..." mix it up, merge a bit, and throw in the odd "Cullen" instead of he.
Okay I've actioned on those now. Thanks.
EchetusXe 01:11, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
You're still using nicknames without introducing them. Who knows what "Shakers" or "Bantams" means without saying what they mean? Personally I'd stick with the club names, this is, after all, an encyclopedia.
The Rambling Man (
Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:42, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Okay I have removed the nicknames.--
EchetusXe 21:58, 11 March 2021 (UTC)reply