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Reviewer: Vinethemonkey ( talk · contribs) 19:44, 26 January 2015 (UTC)
Hello, and I am Vinethemonkey. I shall review this article. Let's begin!
Skimming through the article, I see no obvious grammar and spelling errors. Check thoroughly to make sure that grammar and spelling is correct.
Number of citations are good.
Citation #67 is only a commentary. Please check, and add a reference to it or delete the citation.
Also, a couple of the citations go back all the way to late 1970s. Would this be technically "out of date"? Check this out.
My answer here is: Yes.
Indeed, there are a number of pictures that adequately suit the article. Some may need a citation (I might be wrong; confirm this).
However, I do doubt the matrix picture is necessary. Please check that out, and respond if you do or do not need it.
Also, can you say how the tessellation is related to the M-Theory in the captions?
I will wait for you to do the following:
Confirm these, and respond. I will keep watch of this page. It may take anywhere from 1 day to 1 week for me to respond back.
Thanks! Vinethemonkey ( talk) 19:44, 26 January 2015 (UTC)Vinethemonkey
Thank you Vinethemonkey for this helpful review. I have made changes to the article in response to your comments:
Please let me know if you have any further comments. Polytope24 ( talk) 03:46, 27 January 2015 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vinethemonkey ( talk · contribs) 19:44, 26 January 2015 (UTC)
Hello, and I am Vinethemonkey. I shall review this article. Let's begin!
Skimming through the article, I see no obvious grammar and spelling errors. Check thoroughly to make sure that grammar and spelling is correct.
Number of citations are good.
Citation #67 is only a commentary. Please check, and add a reference to it or delete the citation.
Also, a couple of the citations go back all the way to late 1970s. Would this be technically "out of date"? Check this out.
My answer here is: Yes.
Indeed, there are a number of pictures that adequately suit the article. Some may need a citation (I might be wrong; confirm this).
However, I do doubt the matrix picture is necessary. Please check that out, and respond if you do or do not need it.
Also, can you say how the tessellation is related to the M-Theory in the captions?
I will wait for you to do the following:
Confirm these, and respond. I will keep watch of this page. It may take anywhere from 1 day to 1 week for me to respond back.
Thanks! Vinethemonkey ( talk) 19:44, 26 January 2015 (UTC)Vinethemonkey
Thank you Vinethemonkey for this helpful review. I have made changes to the article in response to your comments:
Please let me know if you have any further comments. Polytope24 ( talk) 03:46, 27 January 2015 (UTC)