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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 23:28, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
The rarest of things (I've only done this once or twice before in more than 100 reviews) — it's a pass without hold! I have no issues with this page, and I only tweaked one sentence. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:28, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
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- Despite his militant support for the MAS—even once controversially threatening to whip those who did not vote in favor of the ruling party—Gallego later grew disenfranchised with the party, ultimately resigning from its ranks in 2017, claiming that it had grown "elite" and no longer attended to the needs of the indigenous peoples of Potosí. Consider splitting this long sentence. I've gone ahead and done this simply because this is the only change I have to recommend.
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Earwig only turns up one work title.
I selected 4 of the 12 in-line citations for checking:
- 3: Romero Ballivián includes all three of the cited details.
- 4: Lists jilanku and segunda mayor among positions held.
- 6: UNITEL report on "whipping" threat.
- 7: Página Siete report on Gallego's resignation and mentions "abandonment" of the indigenous peoples by the government.
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 23:28, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
The rarest of things (I've only done this once or twice before in more than 100 reviews) — it's a pass without hold! I have no issues with this page, and I only tweaked one sentence. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 23:28, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
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- Despite his militant support for the MAS—even once controversially threatening to whip those who did not vote in favor of the ruling party—Gallego later grew disenfranchised with the party, ultimately resigning from its ranks in 2017, claiming that it had grown "elite" and no longer attended to the needs of the indigenous peoples of Potosí. Consider splitting this long sentence. I've gone ahead and done this simply because this is the only change I have to recommend.
Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig only turns up one work title.
I selected 4 of the 12 in-line citations for checking:
- 3: Romero Ballivián includes all three of the cited details.
- 4: Lists jilanku and segunda mayor among positions held.
- 6: UNITEL report on "whipping" threat.
- 7: Página Siete report on Gallego's resignation and mentions "abandonment" of the indigenous peoples by the government.
Other items
Official portrait is CC-BY licensed. Alt text is supplied in the form of the caption.