I really liked reviewing the
Bart Simpson article, so I thought I'd have a go at this one, too. Here are some suggestions:
"In "
Lisa the Vegetarian", her increasing sense of moral righteousness regarding her
vegetarianism leads her to proselytize, culminating in her disruption of a "meat-based"
barbecue prepared by Homer, an act she comes to rue." - I know this isn't simple wikipedia, but I am not sure the average reader would know the meaning of some of these words.
Is there anything more reliable for the awards than the IMDB?
Yes, but I used IMDB because otherwise I would have to use a commentary or Newsbank, and I have always preferred to use online sources first. I've added a commentary ref.
That's it! Another well written article. :)
Nikki311 21:07, 2 November 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review. --
Scorpion0422 22:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)reply
Ok Great. Pass.
Nikki311 01:21, 3 November 2008 (UTC)reply
I really liked reviewing the
Bart Simpson article, so I thought I'd have a go at this one, too. Here are some suggestions:
"In "
Lisa the Vegetarian", her increasing sense of moral righteousness regarding her
vegetarianism leads her to proselytize, culminating in her disruption of a "meat-based"
barbecue prepared by Homer, an act she comes to rue." - I know this isn't simple wikipedia, but I am not sure the average reader would know the meaning of some of these words.
Is there anything more reliable for the awards than the IMDB?
Yes, but I used IMDB because otherwise I would have to use a commentary or Newsbank, and I have always preferred to use online sources first. I've added a commentary ref.
That's it! Another well written article. :)
Nikki311 21:07, 2 November 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks for the review. --
Scorpion0422 22:00, 2 November 2008 (UTC)reply
Ok Great. Pass.
Nikki311 01:21, 3 November 2008 (UTC)reply