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[Reuters https://www.reuters.com/markets/deals/investment-platform-linqto-go-public-via-700-mln-spac-deal-2024-04-09/] and probably other sources but there seem to be plenty. Terraform33 ( talk) 21:23, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
thank you. The page was reviewed on 4/9-4/11 by Kuru, Onel5969, Broc and GhostInTheMachine. Broc did a new page review, in the new page patrol role.
Their edits filled gaps. As a next step I'll remove the sentence about recognition since it's an award.
And this sentence:
Linqto has established a series of proprietary special purpose vehicles (SPVs) which it offers on its investment platform for investors to buy and sell equity interests in private technology companies
Can be adjusted to say:
Linqto deploys special purpose vehicles (SPVs) on its investment platform for investors to buy and sell equity interests in private technology companies. Which is simpler and doesn't "market" the product with the adjective "proprietary. Notability doesn't seem to be a question. I'll do a search to see if there are new sources since it's a Nasdaq company. Terraform33 ( talk) 14:48, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
This paragraph about technology made for Obama presidential team, while sourced, is possible promotion. That's removed, as well, but the good source is kept. Will move live, given the four reviewing editors comments and edits, prior. Terraform33 ( talk) 15:01, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
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[Reuters https://www.reuters.com/markets/deals/investment-platform-linqto-go-public-via-700-mln-spac-deal-2024-04-09/] and probably other sources but there seem to be plenty. Terraform33 ( talk) 21:23, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
thank you. The page was reviewed on 4/9-4/11 by Kuru, Onel5969, Broc and GhostInTheMachine. Broc did a new page review, in the new page patrol role.
Their edits filled gaps. As a next step I'll remove the sentence about recognition since it's an award.
And this sentence:
Linqto has established a series of proprietary special purpose vehicles (SPVs) which it offers on its investment platform for investors to buy and sell equity interests in private technology companies
Can be adjusted to say:
Linqto deploys special purpose vehicles (SPVs) on its investment platform for investors to buy and sell equity interests in private technology companies. Which is simpler and doesn't "market" the product with the adjective "proprietary. Notability doesn't seem to be a question. I'll do a search to see if there are new sources since it's a Nasdaq company. Terraform33 ( talk) 14:48, 17 April 2024 (UTC)
This paragraph about technology made for Obama presidential team, while sourced, is possible promotion. That's removed, as well, but the good source is kept. Will move live, given the four reviewing editors comments and edits, prior. Terraform33 ( talk) 15:01, 17 April 2024 (UTC)