Very well written. One minor quibble; names that are introduced in lead should probably be re-introduced in the body.
I added first names for Rucka and Lark. Those were the only two, right?
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Yes. Also I know its stated in the infobox but is there anyway to clarify in the lead that the series is still ongoing. For some reason, I just assumed it was completed so the word tense in the production section threw me off at first.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 13:59, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Although not GA dependent, I suggest adding a "Characters" section with sourced descriptions. If not, no worries.
I'm not opposed to this, but I'll need to re-read the series before I can start on it. Aside from two, maybe three of the characters, I doubt I'll be able to find anything but primary sources for the descriptions.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
File:Lazarus promotional image.jpg has FUR but the comparison between Lark's promotional image and his published artwork is not present in the article.
I didn't add a direct comparison, but I did incorporate more comments to highlight the changes that are present. When I added it, I was intending the user to use the images to see the comparison him/herself.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Then you may wish to change the FUR to more accurately represent what is in the article.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 13:59, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Kudos to
Argento Surfer on a well-written, comprehensive, reliably sourced article on a topic I knew little about. I'd be interested to see what becomes of the Amazon adaptation.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 14:28, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Very well written. One minor quibble; names that are introduced in lead should probably be re-introduced in the body.
I added first names for Rucka and Lark. Those were the only two, right?
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Yes. Also I know its stated in the infobox but is there anyway to clarify in the lead that the series is still ongoing. For some reason, I just assumed it was completed so the word tense in the production section threw me off at first.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 13:59, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Although not GA dependent, I suggest adding a "Characters" section with sourced descriptions. If not, no worries.
I'm not opposed to this, but I'll need to re-read the series before I can start on it. Aside from two, maybe three of the characters, I doubt I'll be able to find anything but primary sources for the descriptions.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
File:Lazarus promotional image.jpg has FUR but the comparison between Lark's promotional image and his published artwork is not present in the article.
I didn't add a direct comparison, but I did incorporate more comments to highlight the changes that are present. When I added it, I was intending the user to use the images to see the comparison him/herself.
Argento Surfer (
talk) 12:36, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Then you may wish to change the FUR to more accurately represent what is in the article.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 13:59, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply
Kudos to
Argento Surfer on a well-written, comprehensive, reliably sourced article on a topic I knew little about. I'd be interested to see what becomes of the Amazon adaptation.--
TriiipleThreat (
talk) 14:28, 13 October 2017 (UTC)reply