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The lead does a good job of summarizing the article. and the infobox is filled out.
Thank you for the review. I had fun researching this subject. I will make the edits
Bruxton (
talk) 22:58, 4 March 2024 (UTC)reply
First look
"President William McKinley told him that Roosevelt was his murderer; and the ghost asked Schrank to avenge his death." the semicolon is out of place here and it should likely be removed and changed to (his murderer, and the ghost
Y
"In court Schrank stated" suggest a comma after court.
Y
"sanity commission" seems like it should be capitalized
Y
"without shoes and he weighed" suggest the word (and) before without shoes.
Y I rewrote the sentence - it actually needed a different fix
Citations check
Earwig result is 20% and it appears to be because of quotes.
Sources are high quality but I will go through each below to make sure citations line up and support text.
The Early life section is informative, and the citations check out. I like that citations use the specific page number
Done Citations 6 and 9 could be improved with specific page numbers in the citation rather than a range. I do not think it is a must, but I would appreciate it
Y Thanks I corrected this by adding specific page numbers
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
The article was a pleasure to review. Thank you for your attention and cooperation. I am happy to give this a pass.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The lead does a good job of summarizing the article. and the infobox is filled out.
Thank you for the review. I had fun researching this subject. I will make the edits
Bruxton (
talk) 22:58, 4 March 2024 (UTC)reply
First look
"President William McKinley told him that Roosevelt was his murderer; and the ghost asked Schrank to avenge his death." the semicolon is out of place here and it should likely be removed and changed to (his murderer, and the ghost
Y
"In court Schrank stated" suggest a comma after court.
Y
"sanity commission" seems like it should be capitalized
Y
"without shoes and he weighed" suggest the word (and) before without shoes.
Y I rewrote the sentence - it actually needed a different fix
Citations check
Earwig result is 20% and it appears to be because of quotes.
Sources are high quality but I will go through each below to make sure citations line up and support text.
The Early life section is informative, and the citations check out. I like that citations use the specific page number
Done Citations 6 and 9 could be improved with specific page numbers in the citation rather than a range. I do not think it is a must, but I would appreciate it
Y Thanks I corrected this by adding specific page numbers
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
The article was a pleasure to review. Thank you for your attention and cooperation. I am happy to give this a pass.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.