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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 21:34, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll have a review posted for this article within the next day or so.
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Pamzeis, I've posted the review below. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 02:55, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
Her second release of the year– Grammatically, it's not immediately clear whether this refers to Alexander or Egan. I suggest swapping "Her" for "Alexander".
The New York Times favourably commentedand
Comic Book Resources wrote that. The New York Times didn't comment, Lena Wilson from The New York Times did.
Screen Rant stated that despite a poor script– This makes it sound like the article is agreeing that the script is poor. It should be clearer that this is the opinion of the writer.
Alexander was named a Bright Young Thing– Can we get a little context for what this means?
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The film was released in the UK on Sky Cinema.
Her performance was also praised by fans and went viral on the video-sharing app TikTok
Her performance was also praised by fans(the entire article is basically reporting on fans' praise for her performance, I think) and the other sources attached support
went viral on the video-sharing app TikTok
Several of the sources describe her as a model, but there's almost nothing about a modeling career in the article. It doesn't say that she was a model anywhere, it just mentions a couple modeling agencies. How much do the sources say about this part of her career?
No neutrality issues.
No recent disputes.
Image is Creative Commons and has a suitable caption.
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 21:34, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll have a review posted for this article within the next day or so.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 21:34, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
Pamzeis, I've posted the review below. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 02:55, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
Her second release of the year– Grammatically, it's not immediately clear whether this refers to Alexander or Egan. I suggest swapping "Her" for "Alexander".
The New York Times favourably commentedand
Comic Book Resources wrote that. The New York Times didn't comment, Lena Wilson from The New York Times did.
Screen Rant stated that despite a poor script– This makes it sound like the article is agreeing that the script is poor. It should be clearer that this is the opinion of the writer.
Alexander was named a Bright Young Thing– Can we get a little context for what this means?
Spot checks:
The film was released in the UK on Sky Cinema.
Her performance was also praised by fans and went viral on the video-sharing app TikTok
Her performance was also praised by fans(the entire article is basically reporting on fans' praise for her performance, I think) and the other sources attached support
went viral on the video-sharing app TikTok
Several of the sources describe her as a model, but there's almost nothing about a modeling career in the article. It doesn't say that she was a model anywhere, it just mentions a couple modeling agencies. How much do the sources say about this part of her career?
No neutrality issues.
No recent disputes.
Image is Creative Commons and has a suitable caption.