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Reviewer: MrWooHoo ( talk · contribs) 15:17, 8 July 2014 (UTC)' reply

This should be another quick review, just like the last review.

Review

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is " clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   Some prose issues, will be addressed in the section labeled "Comments"

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

   Lead's length is great, and the rest of the article does follow MOS.

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   Fantastic images, tagged with copyyright status.

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   See Comments below. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

   Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

Comments

Redlinks are not required to be fixed, but if you don't mind fixing them that would be great!

• I think they are all notable (i.e. ships), so a redlink is a useful reminder of that. Thanks, Mat ty. 007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

Also, could the following quote be put into a quote box, like the one in Ernest Radcliffe Bond?

I vaguely remember being hauled out of the water, but must have passed out, and when I came to, I was lying on the deck in the German destroyer's wardroom. I remember seeing a picture of Hitler on the wall facing me." (You forgot to put a period at the end of the quote, which I did for you.)

• Thank you, moved to box. Thanks, Mat ty. 007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

That's all I got to say ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

• MrWooHoo: replied to both. Thanks again for the review, Mat ty. 007 15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply

Haha, another quick-pass :D! You work really hard on your articles for GA ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon! 15:37, 8 July 2014 (UTC) reply