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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 17:32, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Let's get this review started before it hits its six month anniversary in the queue.
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"Slip the Drummer One" includes scratching sounds from Swift.isn't cohesive with the rest of the paragraph, making it feel incomplete. Looking at the sources I spotchecked, the Mitchum source talks a bit about its genre, which is really all it needs. And speaking of genre, the other issues is that the lead still doesn't discuss that aspect of the album, even though the genre experimentation might be the album's defining feature. Those two things are the only things holding this back from good article status in my opinion. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 22:19, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Prose, grammar, layout, words to watch, and lists are all good. I did some minor copyediting and added a short description. The only issue here is that the lead needs a little work. It leans a bit heavily on background, and another paragraph should probably be written in the lead to summarize the style, composition, and themes, as these currently aren't mentioned there at all. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:23, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
All sources appear to be reliable. Article is comprehensively cited. WP:EARWIG detected no issues. Spot checked the following for plagiarism and accurate summarizing of sources:
"Spectral Mornings" is an 14-minute psychedelic song that channels the 1960s work of Grateful Dead.
The sourcing on this article isn't terrible, but it seems to need a quick one-over where there are multiple sources on a sentence to make sure that they support what they're attached to and that it's clear what supports what. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 19:01, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Coverage touches on each major aspect, but there are some missing details, particularly regarding composition of individual songs, that could benefit the article. At least some of them should be addressed:
Possible relevance issues:
Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:12, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
No neutrality issues. Article gives a fair analysis of positive and negative reception. No individual's opinion is leaned on too heavily. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:12, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
No issues in edit history or on talk page. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 17:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Three images: two under Creative Commons and one with valid fair use rationale. Images of individuals provide context with a suitable caption. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 17:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Thebiguglyalien ( talk · contribs) 17:32, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Let's get this review started before it hits its six month anniversary in the queue.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk) 17:32, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
"Slip the Drummer One" includes scratching sounds from Swift.isn't cohesive with the rest of the paragraph, making it feel incomplete. Looking at the sources I spotchecked, the Mitchum source talks a bit about its genre, which is really all it needs. And speaking of genre, the other issues is that the lead still doesn't discuss that aspect of the album, even though the genre experimentation might be the album's defining feature. Those two things are the only things holding this back from good article status in my opinion. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 22:19, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Prose, grammar, layout, words to watch, and lists are all good. I did some minor copyediting and added a short description. The only issue here is that the lead needs a little work. It leans a bit heavily on background, and another paragraph should probably be written in the lead to summarize the style, composition, and themes, as these currently aren't mentioned there at all. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:23, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
All sources appear to be reliable. Article is comprehensively cited. WP:EARWIG detected no issues. Spot checked the following for plagiarism and accurate summarizing of sources:
"Spectral Mornings" is an 14-minute psychedelic song that channels the 1960s work of Grateful Dead.
The sourcing on this article isn't terrible, but it seems to need a quick one-over where there are multiple sources on a sentence to make sure that they support what they're attached to and that it's clear what supports what. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 19:01, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Coverage touches on each major aspect, but there are some missing details, particularly regarding composition of individual songs, that could benefit the article. At least some of them should be addressed:
Possible relevance issues:
Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:12, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
No neutrality issues. Article gives a fair analysis of positive and negative reception. No individual's opinion is leaned on too heavily. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 18:12, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
No issues in edit history or on talk page. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 17:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Three images: two under Creative Commons and one with valid fair use rationale. Images of individuals provide context with a suitable caption. Thebiguglyalien ( talk) 17:43, 29 January 2023 (UTC)