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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk · contribs) 21:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
I will look into this.
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Of Aymara descent, Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi, a rural locale situated in La Paz's tropical Yungas region.Perhaps say "Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi to a family of Aymara descent...".
the Supreme Electoral Tribunal opted to take into account UD's victory in Oruro's special ingenious circumscription in its calculationsDid you mean "indigenous"?
as though it was using State resources"State" should probably be lowercase.
Good coverage, good image, etc.; the only issues I can find are very minor. I'm putting it on hold. An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 21:32, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Great job getting to everything so fast. It all looks good now. I will pass it. An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 22:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk · contribs) 21:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
I will look into this.
An anonymous username, not my real name (
talk) 21:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Of Aymara descent, Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi, a rural locale situated in La Paz's tropical Yungas region.Perhaps say "Franz Choque was born on 26 August 1969 in Inquisivi to a family of Aymara descent...".
the Supreme Electoral Tribunal opted to take into account UD's victory in Oruro's special ingenious circumscription in its calculationsDid you mean "indigenous"?
as though it was using State resources"State" should probably be lowercase.
Good coverage, good image, etc.; the only issues I can find are very minor. I'm putting it on hold. An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 21:32, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Great job getting to everything so fast. It all looks good now. I will pass it. An anonymous username, not my real name ( talk) 22:09, 13 November 2022 (UTC)