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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 02:42, 12 March 2023 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


It's rare that I pass a page out of the gate at GAN, but this one is ready. You could always add alt text to the three content images, particularly the map multiple image, but that's really the only substantive improvement I can recommend. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 02:42, 12 March 2023 (UTC) reply
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    I made the only needed copy changes
    b. ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. ( reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    There are two SELFPUB tweets.
    c. ( OR):
    d. ( copyvio and plagiarism):
    No issues in Earwig. Not likely to hit copyvio with the all-Spanish sourcing.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. ( major aspects):
    b. ( focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    Four images are included. The headshot is CC-BY 2.0. The two maps are CC-BY-SA 4.0. The EMAPA image is CC-BY 2.0. Encouragement: Add alt text to the remaining images, particularly the map.
    b. ( appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Copy changes

  • MOS:'S "Morales's", not "Morales'", and "Flores's", not "Flores'" — This is the only copy issue I could find in the page, so I fixed it with an eye to passing the article.

Spot checks

  • 3 (Romero Ballivián 2018): La amplitud de la victoria señaló la fuerza del MAS en el altiplano paceño, en el mundo rural de manera más amplia, con independencia de de los candidatos postulados. De hecho, las campañas parlamentarias son simbólicas. checkY
  • 16 (Página Siete 11-15-20): En tanto, en el caso de Movimiento Al Socialismo (MAS), el nombre que suena más para lograr la nominación es el de Franklin Flores checkY
  • 19 (Urgente 12-27-20): Mentions selection of Flores. checkY
  • 21 (El Deber 1-24-21): Polling released after Felipe Quispe's death but showing him in the lead by 10 percentage points, so he was the "original frontrunner" checkY
  • 33: Accurate translation of the Luis Fernando Chávez quote. checkY
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 02:42, 12 March 2023 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


It's rare that I pass a page out of the gate at GAN, but this one is ready. You could always add alt text to the three content images, particularly the map multiple image, but that's really the only substantive improvement I can recommend. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 02:42, 12 March 2023 (UTC) reply
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    I made the only needed copy changes
    b. ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. ( reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    There are two SELFPUB tweets.
    c. ( OR):
    d. ( copyvio and plagiarism):
    No issues in Earwig. Not likely to hit copyvio with the all-Spanish sourcing.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. ( major aspects):
    b. ( focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    Four images are included. The headshot is CC-BY 2.0. The two maps are CC-BY-SA 4.0. The EMAPA image is CC-BY 2.0. Encouragement: Add alt text to the remaining images, particularly the map.
    b. ( appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Copy changes

  • MOS:'S "Morales's", not "Morales'", and "Flores's", not "Flores'" — This is the only copy issue I could find in the page, so I fixed it with an eye to passing the article.

Spot checks

  • 3 (Romero Ballivián 2018): La amplitud de la victoria señaló la fuerza del MAS en el altiplano paceño, en el mundo rural de manera más amplia, con independencia de de los candidatos postulados. De hecho, las campañas parlamentarias son simbólicas. checkY
  • 16 (Página Siete 11-15-20): En tanto, en el caso de Movimiento Al Socialismo (MAS), el nombre que suena más para lograr la nominación es el de Franklin Flores checkY
  • 19 (Urgente 12-27-20): Mentions selection of Flores. checkY
  • 21 (El Deber 1-24-21): Polling released after Felipe Quispe's death but showing him in the lead by 10 percentage points, so he was the "original frontrunner" checkY
  • 33: Accurate translation of the Luis Fernando Chávez quote. checkY
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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