unusual for a first lieutenant.: do when we know when he was promoted from second to first lieutenant? Or should this be referring to second lieutenant?
Unfortunately, I don't have that information.
Hawkeye7(discuss) 11:34, 20 July 2022 (UTC)reply
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with his wife and son David in 1946,: when I first read this, I was wondering what happened to the other two kids mentioned in the previous section but then realised they must not have had them yet. Perhaps to avoid confusion maybe say "with his family in 1946"
He had been to a broken hip and other ailments.: something not right here and at the start of this paragraph the broken hip is mentioned. Is this a doubleup?
unusual for a first lieutenant.: do when we know when he was promoted from second to first lieutenant? Or should this be referring to second lieutenant?
Unfortunately, I don't have that information.
Hawkeye7(discuss) 11:34, 20 July 2022 (UTC)reply
Missile Development Work
with his wife and son David in 1946,: when I first read this, I was wondering what happened to the other two kids mentioned in the previous section but then realised they must not have had them yet. Perhaps to avoid confusion maybe say "with his family in 1946"
He had been to a broken hip and other ailments.: something not right here and at the start of this paragraph the broken hip is mentioned. Is this a doubleup?