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Yo! I shall review this within one week. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 05:05, 8 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Sorry for the wait! I have left my comments below. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 20:30, 13 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Nice work on the changes! I am satisfied and can now confidently pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 16:53, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go.
File(s)
Image is appropriate and has a valid public CC BY 2.0 license on Commons.
Prose
"fixture of the department's cultural heritage" – I reckon "
Potosí Department's cultural heritage" works fine here.
Can you add a translation in parentheses next to campesinos for unfamiliar readers?
I'd rather not, as the most accurate translation of "peasant" had kind of a negative connotation in this context – "a mob of peasants". Is it ok if I just link to
the relevant section in the article on peasants?
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 04:55, 17 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Rearranged to "current-until-then"; in other words, they were part of the MAS up until their defection to the MTS.
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 05:00, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Ah, I see – that clears things up. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 16:50, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Refs
Spotcheck: I am using
DeepL Translator to translate the text so forgive any errors on my part. Refs 3, 7, 19, 28, 36, 50, 59 and 62 are good.
Ref 11 does not seem to support the first sentence: "Although Maldonado's top billing on the MAS's slate of candidates significantly boosted his odds of entering the Senate, he nonetheless actively campaigned for the position".
Removed mention of his odds being boosted. "Top billing" is still justified; the article labels him "primer candidato a senador", meaning candidate occupying the top slot on the party's senatorial list.
For ref 45 or 46, I recommend putting a citation directly after "a blue hand dictating the unethical actions of the ... Supreme Electoral Tribunal" as it is a direct quotation.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Yo! I shall review this within one week. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 05:05, 8 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Sorry for the wait! I have left my comments below. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 20:30, 13 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Nice work on the changes! I am satisfied and can now confidently pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 16:53, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go.
File(s)
Image is appropriate and has a valid public CC BY 2.0 license on Commons.
Prose
"fixture of the department's cultural heritage" – I reckon "
Potosí Department's cultural heritage" works fine here.
Can you add a translation in parentheses next to campesinos for unfamiliar readers?
I'd rather not, as the most accurate translation of "peasant" had kind of a negative connotation in this context – "a mob of peasants". Is it ok if I just link to
the relevant section in the article on peasants?
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 04:55, 17 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Rearranged to "current-until-then"; in other words, they were part of the MAS up until their defection to the MTS.
Krisgabwoosh (
talk) 05:00, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Ah, I see – that clears things up. ツLunaEatsTuna(
💬)— 16:50, 18 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Refs
Spotcheck: I am using
DeepL Translator to translate the text so forgive any errors on my part. Refs 3, 7, 19, 28, 36, 50, 59 and 62 are good.
Ref 11 does not seem to support the first sentence: "Although Maldonado's top billing on the MAS's slate of candidates significantly boosted his odds of entering the Senate, he nonetheless actively campaigned for the position".
Removed mention of his odds being boosted. "Top billing" is still justified; the article labels him "primer candidato a senador", meaning candidate occupying the top slot on the party's senatorial list.
For ref 45 or 46, I recommend putting a citation directly after "a blue hand dictating the unethical actions of the ... Supreme Electoral Tribunal" as it is a direct quotation.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.