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Reviewer: Ankit Maity ( talk · contribs) 16:21, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Captions not fixed.
I've amended the first caption so that it is now a continuous sentence but the second one is already a complete sentence, not a fragment, and therefore requires a full stop per WP:MOS Meetthefeebles ( talk) 16:41, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
Wikilinks not fixed.
-- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 16:16, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
I've done as suggested with the exception of open space. This is a borderline technical term which some readers may not understand fully (open space can mean green fields, parks, derelict land etc depending on the context) and I think the blue link assists. I've also removed a few more examples of possible over-linking. Meetthefeebles ( talk) 09:04, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Ankit Maity ( talk · contribs) 16:21, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Captions not fixed.
I've amended the first caption so that it is now a continuous sentence but the second one is already a complete sentence, not a fragment, and therefore requires a full stop per WP:MOS Meetthefeebles ( talk) 16:41, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
Wikilinks not fixed.
-- Ankit Maity Talk Contribs 16:16, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
I've done as suggested with the exception of open space. This is a borderline technical term which some readers may not understand fully (open space can mean green fields, parks, derelict land etc depending on the context) and I think the blue link assists. I've also removed a few more examples of possible over-linking. Meetthefeebles ( talk) 09:04, 1 July 2012 (UTC)