"Caion became a figure of infamy and ridicule in the Romanian context," - repetition of "figure", perhaps "Caion was equated with infamy and ridicule", or something similar
" under various pseudonyms: C. A. I. Nică Burduşel, Ion Filionescu, Marin Gelea, Isac Şt. Micu, Roman Muşat etc.[1]" - suggest removal of "etc" and simply state "under various pseudonyms, such as ..."
There are far too many red links, distracting the reader
Red links are permitted under the good article criteria and they are only used where there could be a future article on it.
Thine Antique Pen (
talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)reply
"Caion became a figure of infamy and ridicule in the Romanian context," - repetition of "figure", perhaps "Caion was equated with infamy and ridicule", or something similar
" under various pseudonyms: C. A. I. Nică Burduşel, Ion Filionescu, Marin Gelea, Isac Şt. Micu, Roman Muşat etc.[1]" - suggest removal of "etc" and simply state "under various pseudonyms, such as ..."
There are far too many red links, distracting the reader
Red links are permitted under the good article criteria and they are only used where there could be a future article on it.
Thine Antique Pen (
talk) 13:38, 2 December 2012 (UTC)reply