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Dear contributors,
I have noticed the presence of certain warnings in the article I have written and would like to engage in a discussion to address them.
Firstly, regarding the "Unreliable sources" warning, I have taken this concern into account and made revisions to rectify the situation. I have removed the previous unreliable sources and added credible and verifiable sources from recognized publications in the field. I have also ensured proper citation of my sources in accordance with Wikipedia guidelines.
Regarding the "Conflict of interest" warning, I would like to emphasize that I have carefully considered this matter. While I have some familiarity with the subject as a longtime observer, I have no personal or financial interests that could influence the neutrality of the article. I am firmly committed to maintaining an impartial and factual approach in my writing.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the modifications I have made and provide your comments and suggestions. I am open to any discussion and willing to collaborate with you to improve this article in accordance with Wikipedia standards.
I have removed the flag regarding unreliable sources but not the one regarding the conflict of interest.
Best regards, Gwanwata. Gwanwata ( talk) 11:37, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Could you please guide me on the next steps to remove the COI template from my page?Do you mean your user page, or do you mean a specific article? Netherzone ( talk) 19:51, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Scribe1791 ( talk) 23:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Regarding the Parrish Art Museum PechaKucha video; much of the information drawn from this source is available in articles which are listed below, organized by section.
EARLY LIFE AND EDUCATION
"As an undergraduate student, he did an internship through Long Island University, working as a studio assistant in the Hamptons for artist Steve Miller. Goldberg worked alongside Robert Bardin, a longtime screen printer for Andy Warhol.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"The artist first publicly exhibited his work in the 1989 East End Student Show at the Parrish Art Museum . As a high school student in the 1980's, Goldberg created his first digital drawings and animations on his family's home computer, a Commodore 64.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"As an undergraduate student, he did an internship through Long Island University, working as a studio assistant in the Hamptons for artist Steve Miller. Goldberg worked alongside Robert Bardin, a longtime screen printer for Andy Warhol.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"In the mid-1990s, Goldberg learned HTML and, as a freelance artist, launched brands such as Merrill Lynch, Snapple, and Popular Science onto the web.[10]""
ALTERNATE SOURCE:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
"Shortly after beginning graduate school, his painting Pollock's Studio was accepted into the permanent public collection of the Pollock-Krasner House and Study Center in East Hampton, New York.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
LONG ISLAND
"In 2014, he exhibited a survey of his work at Glenn Horowitz Bookseller in East Hampton, New York. The solo show, curated by the artist Scott Bluedorn..." ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"The Techspressionist Manifesto, which was inspired by artistic manifestos of the past, including the Surrealist Manifesto and the Futurist Manifesto.[8]"
ALTERNATE SOURCE (re: Manifesto) -
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
ARTISTIC STYLE AND INFLUENCES
"Goldberg's early use of software such as Adobe Illustrator in his artwork was inspired by artists such as Andy Warhol, whom Goldberg described as "recontextualizing commercial tools in his practice."
"The artist's interests in digital art and painting converged in his Wireframe series, in which he began experimenting with running painted surfaces through his printer.""
ALTERNATE SOURCES:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
https://www.danspapers.com/2022/04/techspressionism-movement-southampton/
"Goldberg was also heavily influenced by Abstract Expressionist painters such as Franz Kline, whose use of a projector borrowed from Willem de Kooning was the inspiration for a series of pencil drawings that were composed digitally and executed by hand with the aid of a projector.""
ALTERNATE SOURCE:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
Other influences include the artist's maternal grandmother Kimiye Ebisu, an accomplished calligrapher who taught shodō in Hawaii and Japan.[8]
ALTERNATE SOURCES (Japanese Heritage/Influences): https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/ https://hamptonsarthub.com/2014/10/21/techspressionism-reflects-impact-of-japanese-aesthetics/
CURATION
In 2022, Goldberg organized and curated Techspressionism: Digital and Beyond, the first physical exhibition of Techspressionist artworks, which opened at Southampton Arts Center on April 21 of that year.[8] - INCORRECT SOURCING
ALTERNATE SOURCES: https://www.27east.com/arts/techspressionism-a-global-movement-with-local-roots-1933155/ https://www.danspapers.com/2022/04/techspressionism-movement-southampton/ https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
Gwanwata and Scribe1791, Late to the discussion, but I was looking at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Michael Pierre Price last night. It should be deleted. You are creating a Wikipedia:Walled garden full of puffery and peacock terms. Declaring a conflict of interest does not exempt one from needing reliable sources. The affected articles must be written in an encyclopedic tone. BLPs fall under particular scrutiny. I post these comment because the question was "what am I doing wrong?" and I believe the answer is Wikipedia:Autobiography which is strongly discouraged. The warnings aren't going to go away anytime soon. Best, -- WomenArtistUpdates ( talk) 16:38, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
The user below has a request that a significant addition or re-write be made to this article for which that user has an actual or apparent conflict of interest. The requested edits backlog is high. Please be very patient. There are currently 168 requests waiting for review. Please read the instructions for the parameters used by this template for accepting and declining them, and review the request below and make the edit if it is well sourced, neutral, and follows other Wikipedia guidelines and policies. |
For the sake of transparency, I will state that I am the subject of this article, as is noted in the COI declarations on the talk page for the article and my user talk page. There are several sources which have been identified as problematic by another editor on this article's talk page (Dan's Papers, James Lane Post, and PechaKucha). It was stated by the same editor that WIRED, 27 East, Southampton Press, and East Hampton Star are valid sources. PBS and NPR are also listed as sources, albeit being interviews with the subject. Since it would be burdensome to request a change for every reference, I have created a draft rewrite with the problematic sources removed within my userpage sandbox: /info/en/?search=User:Scribe1791/sandbox
My request is that the current article be replaced in its entirety with the rewrite in my userpage sandbox, with any additional cleanup that contributors see fit to specifically address concerns around the article's sourcing and/or neutrality.
I believe the draft rewrite addresses COI concerns regarding sourcing and neutrality through the removal of multiple questionable sources as identified by the editor who placed the COI maintenance tag on this article.
Scribe1791 (
talk) 19:03, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
References
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The following Wikipedia contributor may be personally or professionally connected to the subject of this article. Relevant policies and guidelines may include
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autobiography, and
neutral point of view.
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The following Wikipedia contributor may be personally or professionally connected to the subject of this article. Relevant policies and guidelines may include conflict of interest, autobiography, and neutral point of view. |
Dear contributors,
I have noticed the presence of certain warnings in the article I have written and would like to engage in a discussion to address them.
Firstly, regarding the "Unreliable sources" warning, I have taken this concern into account and made revisions to rectify the situation. I have removed the previous unreliable sources and added credible and verifiable sources from recognized publications in the field. I have also ensured proper citation of my sources in accordance with Wikipedia guidelines.
Regarding the "Conflict of interest" warning, I would like to emphasize that I have carefully considered this matter. While I have some familiarity with the subject as a longtime observer, I have no personal or financial interests that could influence the neutrality of the article. I am firmly committed to maintaining an impartial and factual approach in my writing.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the modifications I have made and provide your comments and suggestions. I am open to any discussion and willing to collaborate with you to improve this article in accordance with Wikipedia standards.
I have removed the flag regarding unreliable sources but not the one regarding the conflict of interest.
Best regards, Gwanwata. Gwanwata ( talk) 11:37, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Could you please guide me on the next steps to remove the COI template from my page?Do you mean your user page, or do you mean a specific article? Netherzone ( talk) 19:51, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Scribe1791 ( talk) 23:41, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
Regarding the Parrish Art Museum PechaKucha video; much of the information drawn from this source is available in articles which are listed below, organized by section.
EARLY LIFE AND EDUCATION
"As an undergraduate student, he did an internship through Long Island University, working as a studio assistant in the Hamptons for artist Steve Miller. Goldberg worked alongside Robert Bardin, a longtime screen printer for Andy Warhol.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"The artist first publicly exhibited his work in the 1989 East End Student Show at the Parrish Art Museum . As a high school student in the 1980's, Goldberg created his first digital drawings and animations on his family's home computer, a Commodore 64.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"As an undergraduate student, he did an internship through Long Island University, working as a studio assistant in the Hamptons for artist Steve Miller. Goldberg worked alongside Robert Bardin, a longtime screen printer for Andy Warhol.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"In the mid-1990s, Goldberg learned HTML and, as a freelance artist, launched brands such as Merrill Lynch, Snapple, and Popular Science onto the web.[10]""
ALTERNATE SOURCE:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
"Shortly after beginning graduate school, his painting Pollock's Studio was accepted into the permanent public collection of the Pollock-Krasner House and Study Center in East Hampton, New York.[8]"" ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
LONG ISLAND
"In 2014, he exhibited a survey of his work at Glenn Horowitz Bookseller in East Hampton, New York. The solo show, curated by the artist Scott Bluedorn..." ALTERNATE SOURCE: https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
"The Techspressionist Manifesto, which was inspired by artistic manifestos of the past, including the Surrealist Manifesto and the Futurist Manifesto.[8]"
ALTERNATE SOURCE (re: Manifesto) -
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
ARTISTIC STYLE AND INFLUENCES
"Goldberg's early use of software such as Adobe Illustrator in his artwork was inspired by artists such as Andy Warhol, whom Goldberg described as "recontextualizing commercial tools in his practice."
"The artist's interests in digital art and painting converged in his Wireframe series, in which he began experimenting with running painted surfaces through his printer.""
ALTERNATE SOURCES:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
https://www.danspapers.com/2022/04/techspressionism-movement-southampton/
"Goldberg was also heavily influenced by Abstract Expressionist painters such as Franz Kline, whose use of a projector borrowed from Willem de Kooning was the inspiration for a series of pencil drawings that were composed digitally and executed by hand with the aid of a projector.""
ALTERNATE SOURCE:
https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/
Other influences include the artist's maternal grandmother Kimiye Ebisu, an accomplished calligrapher who taught shodō in Hawaii and Japan.[8]
ALTERNATE SOURCES (Japanese Heritage/Influences): https://www.wired.com/2014/10/if-picasso-had-a-macbook-pro/ https://hamptonsarthub.com/2014/10/21/techspressionism-reflects-impact-of-japanese-aesthetics/
CURATION
In 2022, Goldberg organized and curated Techspressionism: Digital and Beyond, the first physical exhibition of Techspressionist artworks, which opened at Southampton Arts Center on April 21 of that year.[8] - INCORRECT SOURCING
ALTERNATE SOURCES: https://www.27east.com/arts/techspressionism-a-global-movement-with-local-roots-1933155/ https://www.danspapers.com/2022/04/techspressionism-movement-southampton/ https://jameslanepost.com/colin-goldberg-curator-of-techspressionism/05/23/2022/Hamptons-News-Happenings/
Gwanwata and Scribe1791, Late to the discussion, but I was looking at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Michael Pierre Price last night. It should be deleted. You are creating a Wikipedia:Walled garden full of puffery and peacock terms. Declaring a conflict of interest does not exempt one from needing reliable sources. The affected articles must be written in an encyclopedic tone. BLPs fall under particular scrutiny. I post these comment because the question was "what am I doing wrong?" and I believe the answer is Wikipedia:Autobiography which is strongly discouraged. The warnings aren't going to go away anytime soon. Best, -- WomenArtistUpdates ( talk) 16:38, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
The user below has a request that a significant addition or re-write be made to this article for which that user has an actual or apparent conflict of interest. The requested edits backlog is high. Please be very patient. There are currently 168 requests waiting for review. Please read the instructions for the parameters used by this template for accepting and declining them, and review the request below and make the edit if it is well sourced, neutral, and follows other Wikipedia guidelines and policies. |
For the sake of transparency, I will state that I am the subject of this article, as is noted in the COI declarations on the talk page for the article and my user talk page. There are several sources which have been identified as problematic by another editor on this article's talk page (Dan's Papers, James Lane Post, and PechaKucha). It was stated by the same editor that WIRED, 27 East, Southampton Press, and East Hampton Star are valid sources. PBS and NPR are also listed as sources, albeit being interviews with the subject. Since it would be burdensome to request a change for every reference, I have created a draft rewrite with the problematic sources removed within my userpage sandbox: /info/en/?search=User:Scribe1791/sandbox
My request is that the current article be replaced in its entirety with the rewrite in my userpage sandbox, with any additional cleanup that contributors see fit to specifically address concerns around the article's sourcing and/or neutrality.
I believe the draft rewrite addresses COI concerns regarding sourcing and neutrality through the removal of multiple questionable sources as identified by the editor who placed the COI maintenance tag on this article.
Scribe1791 (
talk) 19:03, 11 March 2024 (UTC)
References