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Reviewer: Bruxton ( talk · contribs) 21:56, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
It complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sectionsMOS:LEAD. Bruxton ( talk) 13:49, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Because the lead usually repeats information that is in the body, editors should balance the desire to avoid redundant citations in the lead with the desire to aid readers in locating sources for challengeable material. Although the presence of citations in the lead is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article, there is no exception to citation requirements specific to leads. The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus. Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none.. But if you really dislike it I can look at reworking the article. Just probably can't get to it until the morning, Could we have an extension until March 18 when you are back? Cielquiparle ( talk) 21:26, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
"permanent collections of National Gallery of Art" consider adding a determiner like "the" before National
"Damianakes,[9][10] was founder" again consider a determiner before founder
"panels in lieu of writing a thesis" consider using "instead" in place of in lieu
"Frank G. Logan prize" should Prize" be capitalied?
"A Farewell to Arms earned her the reputation as creator of" consider "as a creator"
"Other first edition dust jackets" in this use I think first-edition is hyphenated
"Cleo had four sisters, Alexandra, Marie, Stephanie, and Dorothy,[9] with whom she performed Greek dance,[12] and a brother named Solon."[11] consider a minor rewrite to "Cleo had four sisters, Alexandra, Marie, Stephanie, and Dorothy,[9] with whom she performed Greek dance.[12] She also had a brother named Solon."[11]
Covers for Hemingway Good use of notes, and the inflation template
Covers for Hemingway Good understanding of WP:LQ in the section
Covers for Hemingway I cannot access the source but did the source say "I never like the jacket" or was it "liked"?
The article has quality sources and Earwig (24.2%) only alerts to quotes, titles and names
"Early life and education" Citation 8 and 9 support the text
"Early life and education" checked 10 and 19 and both support the text
Etching exhibitions - citation 23 says Among the prints singled out as of extraordinary merit is "The Oak Tree" and our article says "Damianakes's The Oak Tree, was singled out as "extraordinary" in an exhibit in Boston" a reasonable interpretation. I have checked the other citations in this section and they support the text
Covers for Hemingway "In 1925, "Cleon", the name she used to sign her commercial art during this period" in the given source citation 25 I do not see the "Cleon" name used in citation 25, but I see it in ciation 18. Both sources are used for the sentence so it works
Citation 27 supports the quote.
Covers for Hemingway - some citations are offline so I can AGF. All other accessible citations in this section are correctly supporting the text.
Covers for the Fitzgeralds - 7 of the 8 citaitons were offline sources, but citation 36 was checked and it supports the text
Art for other books - The accessible sources were checked for this section and they support the text
Personal life - The citations support the text
Legacy - is it possible to expand this section? If not I understand
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Yes | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Yes | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Yes | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Yes | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Yes | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Yes | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Yes | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Yes | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Yes | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Yes | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Yes | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Yes | |
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Reviewer: Bruxton ( talk · contribs) 21:56, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
It complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sectionsMOS:LEAD. Bruxton ( talk) 13:49, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
Because the lead usually repeats information that is in the body, editors should balance the desire to avoid redundant citations in the lead with the desire to aid readers in locating sources for challengeable material. Although the presence of citations in the lead is neither required in every article nor prohibited in any article, there is no exception to citation requirements specific to leads. The necessity for citations in a lead should be determined on a case-by-case basis by editorial consensus. Complex, current, or controversial subjects may require many citations; others, few or none.. But if you really dislike it I can look at reworking the article. Just probably can't get to it until the morning, Could we have an extension until March 18 when you are back? Cielquiparle ( talk) 21:26, 7 March 2024 (UTC)
"permanent collections of National Gallery of Art" consider adding a determiner like "the" before National
"Damianakes,[9][10] was founder" again consider a determiner before founder
"panels in lieu of writing a thesis" consider using "instead" in place of in lieu
"Frank G. Logan prize" should Prize" be capitalied?
"A Farewell to Arms earned her the reputation as creator of" consider "as a creator"
"Other first edition dust jackets" in this use I think first-edition is hyphenated
"Cleo had four sisters, Alexandra, Marie, Stephanie, and Dorothy,[9] with whom she performed Greek dance,[12] and a brother named Solon."[11] consider a minor rewrite to "Cleo had four sisters, Alexandra, Marie, Stephanie, and Dorothy,[9] with whom she performed Greek dance.[12] She also had a brother named Solon."[11]
Covers for Hemingway Good use of notes, and the inflation template
Covers for Hemingway Good understanding of WP:LQ in the section
Covers for Hemingway I cannot access the source but did the source say "I never like the jacket" or was it "liked"?
The article has quality sources and Earwig (24.2%) only alerts to quotes, titles and names
"Early life and education" Citation 8 and 9 support the text
"Early life and education" checked 10 and 19 and both support the text
Etching exhibitions - citation 23 says Among the prints singled out as of extraordinary merit is "The Oak Tree" and our article says "Damianakes's The Oak Tree, was singled out as "extraordinary" in an exhibit in Boston" a reasonable interpretation. I have checked the other citations in this section and they support the text
Covers for Hemingway "In 1925, "Cleon", the name she used to sign her commercial art during this period" in the given source citation 25 I do not see the "Cleon" name used in citation 25, but I see it in ciation 18. Both sources are used for the sentence so it works
Citation 27 supports the quote.
Covers for Hemingway - some citations are offline so I can AGF. All other accessible citations in this section are correctly supporting the text.
Covers for the Fitzgeralds - 7 of the 8 citaitons were offline sources, but citation 36 was checked and it supports the text
Art for other books - The accessible sources were checked for this section and they support the text
Personal life - The citations support the text
Legacy - is it possible to expand this section? If not I understand
100% reviewed
Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | Yes | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | Yes | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | Yes | |
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | Yes | |
2c. it contains no original research. | Yes | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | Yes | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | Yes | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | Yes | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | Yes | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Yes | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | Yes | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | Yes | |
7. Overall assessment. |