This is awkward: A brief encounter with a privateer separated the
Brillant, one of the expedition's six ships. As is this: On September 11 Lieutenant Colonel Rhett sailed the colonial flotilla out to find the invaders, but found they had sailed off. Clarify this: They also mobilized Indian forces to attack Mobile, but these efforts were frustrated in part by French diplomacy and false rumors of another Franco-Spanish expedition. Was it the combination of French diplomacy and false rumors that frustrated the planned attack? Rephrased all of these. Magic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)reply
Add state of publication for all those that don't have it, and need place of publication for Marley, which should also be listed alphabetically in the References section. DoneMagic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)reply
This is awkward: A brief encounter with a privateer separated the
Brillant, one of the expedition's six ships. As is this: On September 11 Lieutenant Colonel Rhett sailed the colonial flotilla out to find the invaders, but found they had sailed off. Clarify this: They also mobilized Indian forces to attack Mobile, but these efforts were frustrated in part by French diplomacy and false rumors of another Franco-Spanish expedition. Was it the combination of French diplomacy and false rumors that frustrated the planned attack? Rephrased all of these. Magic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)reply
Add state of publication for all those that don't have it, and need place of publication for Marley, which should also be listed alphabetically in the References section. DoneMagic♪piano 12:35, 4 September 2012 (UTC)reply