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Despite the rain, in Merida, Yucatan people assisted to the "Monumento a la Patria" to celebrate Mexico’s Bicentennial. The famous singer Juan Gabriel was the attraction of the night, interpreting his most famous songs. The civil- military parade started at 8:00am in the “Plaza Principal” of the city. The army, air force, Armada de Mexico, students, and firefighters were part of the parade that fascinated the families present in this event.
All in all, quite well written and presented. [User:Ling Nut] has some good pointers but here are a few I believe he missed. I'm not going to do any editing at this point as you only asked for feedback and I believe you should be able to present it as you see fit before letting the dogs loose. A few minor thing stick out (at least to me).
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[User:Ling Nut] starts off with a few good pointers but then starts delving into current affairs. These need reviewing and deleting as applicable. Anything relevent to the article (i.e. the preps, celbrations, direct aftermath) and not the current happenings which can trace their roots back to the Iceland banks and US Insurance companies. Angry Mustelid ( talk) 01:37, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
Whenever facts are stated involving numbers, especially numbers involving of people, a citation should be given where the number can be found. If 1,000,000 people attended a parade, the sentence that states that fact needs to have a citation following it.
Numbers must also make sense. In the section about the Military parade, a sentence says:
"In the presence of Felipe Calderón Hinojosa, president of Mexico, the military parade began with the free fall of 17 paratroopers, 12 from the Navy and 15 from the army"
If 17 paratroopers landed, how were 12 of them from the Navy and 15 of them from the Army? 12+15=27 not 17. A source needs to be found that gives the correct number or clarifies the information. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 03:10, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I was just asking because I thought it was a good idea to complete the information of last article but. We have finish our part of cultural events on the bicentennial article and we are working on Alpura article. Greetings —Preceding unsigned comment added by MarioAlvarez05 ( talk • contribs) 22:26, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
I'm sorry by my english, I'm an mexican reader and I get in the article today and saw an error; in November 20, 1910 was Francisco I. Madero who started the Revolution no Francisco Villa, Villa joined to the fight after the death of Madero even Pascual Orozco no be part of the war until the last steps of the same, please make better your investigation about history of other countries. If you don't believe me please read the Wikipedia in Spanish in the article title "Revolución Mexicana" or in a elementary school textbook of México Greetings
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Despite the rain, in Merida, Yucatan people assisted to the "Monumento a la Patria" to celebrate Mexico’s Bicentennial. The famous singer Juan Gabriel was the attraction of the night, interpreting his most famous songs. The civil- military parade started at 8:00am in the “Plaza Principal” of the city. The army, air force, Armada de Mexico, students, and firefighters were part of the parade that fascinated the families present in this event.
All in all, quite well written and presented. [User:Ling Nut] has some good pointers but here are a few I believe he missed. I'm not going to do any editing at this point as you only asked for feedback and I believe you should be able to present it as you see fit before letting the dogs loose. A few minor thing stick out (at least to me).
Remember, these are just my opinions, the way that I'd do things.
We each have our own styles and, so long as we follow the basic guidelines, we are free to present our material in whichever way we choose.
Ignore everything I've said if you want or don't agree with it
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Keep it up.
If I can be of any more assistance then please feel free to contact me. Angry Mustelid ( talk) 20:19, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
[User:Ling Nut] starts off with a few good pointers but then starts delving into current affairs. These need reviewing and deleting as applicable. Anything relevent to the article (i.e. the preps, celbrations, direct aftermath) and not the current happenings which can trace their roots back to the Iceland banks and US Insurance companies. Angry Mustelid ( talk) 01:37, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
Whenever facts are stated involving numbers, especially numbers involving of people, a citation should be given where the number can be found. If 1,000,000 people attended a parade, the sentence that states that fact needs to have a citation following it.
Numbers must also make sense. In the section about the Military parade, a sentence says:
"In the presence of Felipe Calderón Hinojosa, president of Mexico, the military parade began with the free fall of 17 paratroopers, 12 from the Navy and 15 from the army"
If 17 paratroopers landed, how were 12 of them from the Navy and 15 of them from the Army? 12+15=27 not 17. A source needs to be found that gives the correct number or clarifies the information. -- nsaum75 ¡שיחת! 03:10, 16 October 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I was just asking because I thought it was a good idea to complete the information of last article but. We have finish our part of cultural events on the bicentennial article and we are working on Alpura article. Greetings —Preceding unsigned comment added by MarioAlvarez05 ( talk • contribs) 22:26, 17 October 2010 (UTC)
I'm sorry by my english, I'm an mexican reader and I get in the article today and saw an error; in November 20, 1910 was Francisco I. Madero who started the Revolution no Francisco Villa, Villa joined to the fight after the death of Madero even Pascual Orozco no be part of the war until the last steps of the same, please make better your investigation about history of other countries. If you don't believe me please read the Wikipedia in Spanish in the article title "Revolución Mexicana" or in a elementary school textbook of México Greetings
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