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Reviewer: FuzzyMagma ( talk · contribs) 14:33, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
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Populated, legally recognized places are typically presumed to be notable, even if their population is very low." put I understand your concern as also
in general, a red link should remain in an article if there is a reasonable expectation that the article in question will eventually be created(per WP:Redlink). FuzzyMagma ( talk) 16:24, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
gaining "prominence" in trade unionism, reword to remove WP:WTA
Her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region, I wonder if you can rephrase this to "According to Marcelo Justoto, a XX at XX, her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region" just to void encroaching on Wikipedia:Wikivoice. Also I did a spot check and the refs does not state that
Aged 66 by the time her term expiredwas her age the reason for not being reelected? if not then please remove as irrelevant
comment below this please FuzzyMagma ( talk) 17:23, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
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will review this FuzzyMagma ( talk) 14:33, 20 September 2023 (UTC)
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Overall: well written some minor comments below |
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Populated, legally recognized places are typically presumed to be notable, even if their population is very low." put I understand your concern as also
in general, a red link should remain in an article if there is a reasonable expectation that the article in question will eventually be created(per WP:Redlink). FuzzyMagma ( talk) 16:24, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
gaining "prominence" in trade unionism, reword to remove WP:WTA
Her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region, I wonder if you can rephrase this to "According to Marcelo Justoto, a XX at XX, her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region" just to void encroaching on Wikipedia:Wikivoice. Also I did a spot check and the refs does not state that
Aged 66 by the time her term expiredwas her age the reason for not being reelected? if not then please remove as irrelevant
comment below this please FuzzyMagma ( talk) 17:23, 20 September 2023 (UTC)