"Xenon arc searchlights were introduced in the 1960s.[16] LED models became available in 2019.[17]" make it clear that C&F did this, not that the technology was generally available.
"fresnel lenses." aren't Fresnel capitalised?
"in landfall lights" what's that?
"Information plates.." no full stop required in this caption.
"Gasoline powered dynamo, 1912." ditto.
"from the open sea." [1] format that as a proper reference.
Avoid SHOUTING in reference titles.
Consistent date formats in refs.
"1894 establishments in Ohio" etc, the article says it's not clear if it was 1893 or 1894, so this (and other such categories) should be 1890s and not this specific year.
Thanks for the quick review. I've fixed everything except for "in landfall lights" what's that?. There's a footnote explaining what a landfall light it. Is that not sufficient? --
RoySmith(talk) 00:05, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Ugh, apparently putting a reference in a reference blows up. I'm not sure how to fix that. --
RoySmith(talk) 00:07, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply
"Xenon arc searchlights were introduced in the 1960s.[16] LED models became available in 2019.[17]" make it clear that C&F did this, not that the technology was generally available.
"fresnel lenses." aren't Fresnel capitalised?
"in landfall lights" what's that?
"Information plates.." no full stop required in this caption.
"Gasoline powered dynamo, 1912." ditto.
"from the open sea." [1] format that as a proper reference.
Avoid SHOUTING in reference titles.
Consistent date formats in refs.
"1894 establishments in Ohio" etc, the article says it's not clear if it was 1893 or 1894, so this (and other such categories) should be 1890s and not this specific year.
Thanks for the quick review. I've fixed everything except for "in landfall lights" what's that?. There's a footnote explaining what a landfall light it. Is that not sufficient? --
RoySmith(talk) 00:05, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Ugh, apparently putting a reference in a reference blows up. I'm not sure how to fix that. --
RoySmith(talk) 00:07, 26 March 2021 (UTC)reply